Iron Heroes

[Crothian]

Zimbel, you should right a review on it

 

[Man-thing]

For lior_shapira

Quoted and edited:

I really like your reviews Crothian but perhaps you should proofread them once more before posting. No offence to you, the English is good but I think with one more read you could really polish the review.

- There corrected. You mean like that?

proofread is one word.
offense in English should be offence (in American English it's offense)
English should be capitalized.
Since it was already posted you should use could instead of can because of tense.
I'm assuming "it" referred to the review but where it was placed referred to the noun English.

 

[JEL]

Armor just gives damage reduction. It doesn't add to AC at all in Iron Heroes.

 

[Riggs]

No need to jump, Man-thing, though you are grammatically correct, you also seem to have misinterpreted lior's use of "English"--as in ESL, not England so offense would be correct. I think you also misinterpreted lior's point, which was not "I am so much better at using the English language" (your point, apparently) but more like "Crothian's reviews are good but there are too many jarring misspellings and things that make me have to reread sentences which detract from an otherwise solid review."

I happen to agree with lior, Crothian does write good reviews that I enjoy, but I often have to stop and reread portions due to spelling or grammatical errors. I did not sense attack by lior, but I did by you. It is unfortunate.

Also you misspelled Man-Thing.