D&D 5E (2014) Known World Monster Manual Sample...Forwyn Oedran aka the Witch of Years

[77IM]

As a formatting suggestion: the lines in the flavor-text are packed too densely, making it very unpleasant to read. It's hurting my brain just to look at it.

Your stat-block format is perfect, though.

 

[dave2008]

As a formatting suggestion: the lines in the flavor-text are packed too densely, making it very unpleasant to read. It's hurting my brain just to look at it.

Your stat-block format is perfect, though.

Not quite perfect, but close. The innate spell list order is wrong, it should be:
At-will:
3/day each:
1/day each: