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<blockquote data-quote="Guilt Puppy" data-source="post: 1397199" data-attributes="member: 6521">Alright, ManicFuel's on the first list of alternates.I should note that I'll be structuring at least the first part of the game around your characters -- so if you have anything specific you'd like to pursue, feel free to mention it.Voadam:Your character looks okay, but here's a quick list of errors/formatting problems I ran into:- I'd prefer if Dex 18 (20) read as Dex 20 (16 base, +2 level, +2 enh)... It's just easier for me to use that way. Also, I tend to prefer the standard order (Str/Dex/Con/Int/Wis/Cha), although looking back at the template I think that was my gaff <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />- Base melee should be the bonuses you'd have with, say, a club you picked up off of an enemy -- straight BAB + Str. The attack bonuses for the rapier/dagger combo should be in the weapon section.- Your initiative bonus should be +9, not +6.- Your cloak of resistance is marked on the equipment section as +2, although it's clear from the price and the bonus you have marked elsewhere that it's since been downgraded to a +1.Those changes notwithstanding, you can consider the character approved.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Guilt Puppy, post: 1397199, member: 6521"] Alright, ManicFuel's on the first list of alternates. I should note that I'll be structuring at least the first part of the game around your characters -- so if you have anything specific you'd like to pursue, feel free to mention it. Voadam: Your character looks okay, but here's a quick list of errors/formatting problems I ran into: - I'd prefer if Dex 18 (20) read as Dex 20 (16 base, +2 level, +2 enh)... It's just easier for me to use that way. Also, I tend to prefer the standard order (Str/Dex/Con/Int/Wis/Cha), although looking back at the template I think that was my gaff :) - Base melee should be the bonuses you'd have with, say, a club you picked up off of an enemy -- straight BAB + Str. The attack bonuses for the rapier/dagger combo should be in the weapon section. - Your initiative bonus should be +9, not +6. - Your cloak of resistance is marked on the equipment section as +2, although it's clear from the price and the bonus you have marked elsewhere that it's since been downgraded to a +1. Those changes notwithstanding, you can consider the character approved. [/QUOTE]

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