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<blockquote data-quote="Steampunkette" data-source="post: 9411710" data-attributes="member: 6796468">This hasn't gone to any kind of proofreading or editing pass. Not even my own editing pass. This is me at 3am taking my Dev Notes and first-pass shaping them into something workable.I'm just riding DAVE's dopamine where it leads me, for now! I'm really hoping to get far enough that all the rules-editing is cleared before my husband gets in on the grammatical editing pass...Last night he got through 3 pages of the Champion and had a ton of notes on my inappropriate use of commas, my utter lack of colons and semicolons, and various linguistic nitpicks like &quot;Woe Betide&quot; not needing a &quot;To&quot; before describing who is getting some Woe.It'll be cleaned up a lot. Promise!1) No save, start of your next turn.2) I'll look into Rebound or something similar. Maybe call it &quot;Ricochet Something&quot; or &quot;Something's Ricochet&quot; if I can't find anything strong enough.3) It's meant to be taking your action to make that one attack.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Steampunkette, post: 9411710, member: 6796468"] This hasn't gone to any kind of proofreading or editing pass. Not even my own editing pass. This is me at 3am taking my Dev Notes and first-pass shaping them into something workable. I'm just riding DAVE's dopamine where it leads me, for now! I'm really hoping to get far enough that all the rules-editing is cleared before my husband gets in on the grammatical editing pass... Last night he got through 3 pages of the Champion and had a ton of notes on my inappropriate use of commas, my utter lack of colons and semicolons, and various linguistic nitpicks like "Woe Betide" not needing a "To" before describing who is getting some Woe. It'll be cleaned up a lot. Promise! 1) No save, start of your next turn. 2) I'll look into Rebound or something similar. Maybe call it "Ricochet Something" or "Something's Ricochet" if I can't find anything strong enough. 3) It's meant to be taking your action to make that one attack. [/QUOTE]

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