Unicron818
First Post
Unicron,
I just read your post and it was extremely detailed and creative. However, it progresses the story a lot faster than planned. It also throws off the pace of events. I do not want you to delete it or change it due to all the effort you must of put into it. I will post tonight and work it into the story but it will change the impact of the post.
Also, I do not want anyone else to post based off of Unicron's. You can use his post as far as his class is in line in the gym for scanning. Consider that as far as it goes.
Thanks,
Nuke
Nuke repairs have been made. Hope this is better. Let me know please.
you know, its none of my buisness but I'd recomend just taking a little less creative freedom. Still that was a damn good one
Also, Radiant thanks for the advise, I will try to keep that in mind, thanks for the compliment
