MEG Hal
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CCamfield said:Well... some things in it really bugged me, and that may have prevented me from giving it an honest assessment. Maybe I should re-read it.
Particularly, I thought that everything about the (fairly central) Jaisyn Bruce character was terrible. Starting with his name, and going on to his dialogue. Gaaaaah. Cheese. I think this was my biggest problem with the book.
The inclusion of Indonesian kris-knives in a desert environment was a wrong note to me, and I thought the ceramic armour was ridiculous.
Finally, I thought the tombs at the end felt very much tacked-on, as if it was a necessity to include a dungeon but one didn't fit into the plot of the adventure.
I do not think any of these issues will impact your feelings for Dry Land, Jeff Quinn wrote I:SoP and Becky Glenn wrote Dry Land. So issues with Jaisyn and the end will have no effect, but some of the items will be reused-so that may impact your decision. Please look it over and I would love to hear your feedback.