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<blockquote data-quote="Headbomb" data-source="post: 6660009" data-attributes="member: 6797480">A few typos in the spell sheet.Spell | Current / What it should be should be, maybeAntipathy/Sympathy | Duration &quot;10 days&quot;. A super anal retentive person could argue that since you write 10 h, 10 min, etc.. you should write &quot;10 d&quot;. But they would need to be super anal retentive.Animate Dead | &quot;Turn corpes&quot; should be &quot;Turn corspes&quot;.Blade Barrier | Missing the (l x w x h) thing. Personally I would omit the (l x w x h) thing for all other spells, and mention in the manual that the order is (l x w x h) but that's just me.Control Flames / Shape Water | Duration &quot;Instant. or 1 h.&quot; --&gt; Instant. is not defined in the abbreviation list. It's kind of obvious, but I thought I'd point it out. Abbreviating Instantaneous to Instant. everywhere would also be nice.Death Ward | &quot;instantenous&quot; should be &quot;instantaneous&quot;.Elemental Bane | &quot;choosen&quot; should be &quot;chosen&quot;.Faerie Fire | &quot;invisibile&quot; should be &quot;invisible&quot;Flame Arrows | &quot;succesful&quot; should be &quot;successful&quot;Flesh to Stone &quot;succes&quot; should be &quot;successes&quot;Gentle Repose | &quot;becominutesg undead&quot; should be &quot;becoming undead&quot;. Likelike a find/replace gone awry.Leomund's Tiny Hut | &quot;9 Medium crea&quot; should probably be &quot;9 med. crea&quot;Magic Jar |&quot;posess&quot; should be &quot;possess&quot;.Move Earth | &quot;concentratoin&quot; should be &quot;concentration&quot;. Or &quot;conc.&quot;Plant Growth | Time &quot;1a/8h&quot; should be &quot;1 a/8 h&quot; per spacing conventions used elsewhereSee Invisibility | &quot;See invisibility&quot; should be capitalized to &quot;See Invisibility&quot; (needs to be modified in two places)Skywrite | &quot;diperse&quot; should be &quot;disperse&quot;.Sleep | &quot;consious&quot; should be &quot;conscious&quot;.Tsunami | Conc, 6 rnds --&gt; Conc, 6 rnd (I'm not sure about this one. If you treat it as an undotted abbreviation, it could take the plural s. But everything else is treated as unit symbols, and those don't take the plural s [8 h vs not 8 hs, 10 min vs not 10 mins])Watery Sphere | &quot;restained&quot; should be &quot;restrained&quot;You might also want to do a find/replace for double spaces --&gt; single spaces.You might also want to do a find/replace for &quot;1a&quot; --&gt; &quot;1 a&quot; there are a lot of those.I note that sometimes you write &quot;Int (Investigation)&quot; and others &quot;Wis(Perception/Survival)&quot; consistency in spacing would be good.I note that sometimes you write &quot;Dex half&quot; &quot;Dex halves&quot; and &quot;Dex save halves&quot; (likewise for other stats). I'd go with a consistent &quot;Dex halves&quot; or &quot;Dex save halves&quot; here (likewise for other stats).Some spells uses the abbrevation &quot;obsc.&quot; for obscured. that should be defined in the manualAlso, I would personally enforce Bludg./Slash./Pierc. everywhere for consistency, regardless of space, but that's just me.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Headbomb, post: 6660009, member: 6797480"] A few typos in the spell sheet. Spell | Current / What it should be should be, maybe Antipathy/Sympathy | Duration "10 days". A super anal retentive person could argue that since you write 10 h, 10 min, etc.. you should write "10 d". But they would need to be super anal retentive. Animate Dead | "Turn corpes" should be "Turn corspes". Blade Barrier | Missing the ([I]l[/I] x [I]w[/I] x [I]h[/I]) thing. Personally I would omit the ([I]l[/I] x [I]w[/I] x [I]h[/I]) thing for all other spells, and mention in the manual that the order is ([I]l[/I] x [I]w[/I] x [I]h[/I]) but that's just me. Control Flames / Shape Water | Duration "Instant. or 1 h." --> Instant. is not defined in the abbreviation list. It's kind of obvious, but I thought I'd point it out. Abbreviating Instantaneous to Instant. everywhere would also be nice. Death Ward | "instantenous" should be "instantaneous". Elemental Bane | "choosen" should be "chosen". Faerie Fire | "invisibile" should be "invisible" Flame Arrows | "succesful" should be "successful" Flesh to Stone "succes" should be "successes" Gentle Repose | "becominutesg undead" should be "becoming undead". Likelike a find/replace gone awry. Leomund's Tiny Hut | "9 Medium crea" should probably be "9 med. crea" Magic Jar |"posess" should be "possess". Move Earth | "concentratoin" should be "concentration". Or "conc." Plant Growth | Time "1a/8h" should be "1 a/8 h" per spacing conventions used elsewhere See Invisibility | "See invisibility" should be capitalized to "See Invisibility" (needs to be modified in two places) Skywrite | "diperse" should be "disperse". Sleep | "consious" should be "conscious". Tsunami | Conc, 6 rnds --> Conc, 6 rnd (I'm not sure about this one. If you treat it as an undotted abbreviation, it could take the plural s. But everything else is treated as unit symbols, and those don't take the plural s [8 h vs not 8 hs, 10 min vs not 10 mins]) Watery Sphere | "restained" should be "restrained" You might also want to do a find/replace for double spaces --> single spaces. You might also want to do a find/replace for "1a" --> "1 a" there are a lot of those. I note that sometimes you write "Int (Investigation)" and others "Wis(Perception/Survival)" consistency in spacing would be good. I note that sometimes you write "Dex half" "Dex halves" and "Dex save halves" (likewise for other stats). I'd go with a consistent "Dex halves" or "Dex save halves" here (likewise for other stats). Some spells uses the abbrevation "obsc." for obscured. that should be defined in the manual Also, I would personally enforce Bludg./Slash./Pierc. everywhere for consistency, regardless of space, but that's just me. [/QUOTE]

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