Reply to thread

Message

<blockquote data-quote="Noah Ivaldi" data-source="post: 6692827" data-attributes="member: 6797143">Excellent!The grammar is mostly good, or it's as close as it can be when given space concerns. I'm lookin' at you, rock gnomes. Most of the issues are in punctuation, of course, but I'm also adding in a few clarifications (e.g. elves and warforged have to take it easy for eight hours, just like everyone else, for the benefits of a long rest, and talons are monk weapons because they're still unarmed strikes), and I'm coding in some additions (Hellish Rebuke (3d10) into the reactions list of tieflings, longtooth and razorclaw weapons that show up in your weapons list when you select the races, but also have notes in their descriptions that remind you that you only have them while shifted), and consistency fixes. There's quite a bit, here, but I'm just ignoring the personality crap and leaving whatever English errors the book has, so that cuts down on the workload a lot.EDIT: You know, I thought of something. Why exactly do equipment entries on the left all have hyphens before them? Previously, when I added a pack of things, the container would be listed as something like &quot;Backpack, with:&quot; with the items that are inside it listed underneath and individually preceded by hyphens, but, now, it's everything on the left side. Is this just a style preference?Also edit: I keep forgetting to ask about the weight fields. When we have decimals that are too lengthy, such as 0.25, the fields round. Thankfully, the subtotal and total weight fields are calculated correctly when this happens, but, when we print them out, the information can be misleading. Now, I'll happily grant the fact that this, like any other issue, can be solved with a simple &quot;RTFB&quot; statement, but I was wondering if there was a way to eke out just enough space for the weight fields that it wouldn't have to round such things as the weight of pitons.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Noah Ivaldi, post: 6692827, member: 6797143"] Excellent! The grammar is mostly good, or it's as close as it can be when given space concerns. I'm lookin' at you, rock gnomes. Most of the issues are in punctuation, of course, but I'm also adding in a few clarifications (e.g. elves and warforged have to take it easy for eight hours, just like everyone else, for the benefits of a long rest, and talons are monk weapons because they're still unarmed strikes), and I'm coding in some additions (Hellish Rebuke (3d10) into the reactions list of tieflings, longtooth and razorclaw weapons that show up in your weapons list when you select the races, but also have notes in their descriptions that remind you that you only have them while shifted), and consistency fixes. There's quite a bit, here, but I'm just ignoring the personality crap and leaving whatever English errors the book has, so that cuts down on the workload a lot. EDIT: You know, I thought of something. Why exactly do equipment entries on the left all have hyphens before them? Previously, when I added a pack of things, the container would be listed as something like "Backpack, with:" with the items that are inside it listed underneath and individually preceded by hyphens, but, now, it's everything on the left side. Is this just a style preference? Also edit: I keep forgetting to ask about the weight fields. When we have decimals that are too lengthy, such as 0.25, the fields round. Thankfully, the subtotal and total weight fields are calculated correctly when this happens, but, when we print them out, the information can be misleading. Now, I'll happily grant the fact that this, like any other issue, can be solved with a simple "RTFB" statement, but I was wondering if there was a way to eke out just enough space for the weight fields that it wouldn't have to round such things as the weight of pitons. [/QUOTE]

Verification