My "Art"

[Tsyr]

Did you notice the part where I said (paraphrase), "This part is OK, even though it breaks grammatical rules"? In most of the places, it just didn't look good.

*chuckles*

No, I honestly didn't see that one, sorry. My appolgies.

Finally, Tsyr, you can say all you like that it's okay to mangle grammatical rules to get your message across... I agree; however, the transition between sentence one and two is a period. A freaking period! Commas are quite useful for separating compound sentences.

Yes, I quite agree. Blatent mauling is just that. I was really more directing that comment towards other things... for example, saying the line "A low rise, a place where a long vanished ridge once loomed above the plain." is a fragment is true. However, for a certain type of writing, that's not actualy a bad thing at all times.

Wasn't saying you should use grammar at the drunken-monkey level and I would support that use, sorry if it came across that way.

 

[Piratecat]

Insulting folks back isn't especially good form... but for the purpose of this forum, prose isn't art.

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