My first product review, for "Shelzar"

Shadowdancer

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I just posted my first product review on the review board. It's for "Shelzar: City of Sin," a product I really like. I was surprised that my review was the first for this product.
 
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Good review of an interesting-sounding book!

Stylistically, the way you formatted your review was interesting... but I think it would have been more effective to place your final conclusions at the end of the review.
 

CCamfield said:
Good review of an interesting-sounding book!

Stylistically, the way you formatted your review was interesting... but I think it would have been more effective to place your final conclusions at the end of the review.

Yeah, I was thinking about doing a summation paragraph or two at the end, but then didn't. Guess I should have gone with my first instinct. Thanks for the input.
 


Good review!


Some people don't like to read the entire review if it's long (I don't know why, but it's been mentioned to me), so they apreciate a small summary of the book at the begining.
 

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