My First Review: The Penumbral Pentagon - your feedback appreciated

[BigFreekinGoblinoid]

Hi all,

After wanting to write some reviews for many moons now, I finally sat down and did one. Feel free to read the review and offer me your suggestions for improving my review format and style.

Thanks in advance,

BFG

http://www.enworld.org/reviews/index.php?sub=yes&where=active&reviewer=bfg&product=PP1

 

[Nightfall]

Comments up for you Biggie. Hope you find it useful.