D&D 5E New Homebrew Monsters - Enforcers

[Stalker0]

Working with @dave2008 on a lot of his monsters inspired me to work on some of my own. These guys are actually protagonists in a fantasy series I am writing, but I thought I would give them the "dnd monster treatment" for fun.

Enforcers: While the gods often use Inevitables and Angles to carry out their divine orders, there are circumstances that require more "flexibility" in their handling. For these tasks, the gods use Enforcers, mortals whose essence has been attached to a source of great power. Enforcers represent the perfection of their form in one way or another.

All enforcers were made at the same time, and that communal birth manifests in a harmonious state known as the "Battlemind". Two or more enforcers working together have a preternatural sense of each others action, and can draw on each others power, growing far stronger than they ever could alone. A single Enforcer is always a threat, but multiple enforcers are a true terror to behold.


The stat blocks are noted in posts below:

 

[dave2008]

Love the flavor! I will give you my quick review in a bit, I've got to finish up some yard work before I loose the day light.

PS - Is it OK if I think to these in the Table of Contents of my thread? I will credit you of course.

 

[Stalker0]

Love the flavor! I will give you my quick review in a bit, I've got to finish up some yard work before I loose the day light.

PS - Is it OK if I think to these in the Table of Contents of my thread? I will credit you of course.

Once they get a once over and people agree they look good, absolutely

 

[dave2008]

OK, here are my thoughts on the Divine Mind:

1) I am getting a slightly higher CR. I had Defensive of 15 and Offensive of 13 so CR 14.

• Defensive: base 11 + 4 for effective AC of 25 (22 +2 for 3 saves per DMG +1 for auto saves) = 15
• Offensive: base 12 + 1 for effective attack of 11 (I gave it +3 for advantage) = 13

2) I would like to see some skills, I would at least go with perception. But I could see these guys having a lot.

3) I really like battlemind. You really don't want to face a bunch of these guys. Speaking of which you used gendered pronoun somewhere, not sure these are all make or not, but that might be a thing.

4) I like the weapon options: most damage, reach, or range. I don't feel you need to restate the critical range though. Also, I might suggest adding a maneuver or two to some of these. Maybe Divine Mind can cleave with the greatsword or knock prone with the halberd?

5) I like the Pillar of divinity. Lots of options with that. However, since it is always up it might be a bit strong or you might need to figure that 14 HP like regeneration. I would also prefer that you list what the pillar does rather than refer to a spell. But I get it.

6) Divine Memory: Again I prefer you tell me what it does than refer to a spell. More so because it doesn't have any spellcasting trait I'm not expecting to have to look up spells.

Overall a very interesting challenge. I look forward to looking at the rest of them.

 

[dave2008]

Seismic Slam: Melee Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, reach 5 ft., one target. Hit: 20 (2d6 + 13) bludgeoning damage and the target must succeed on a Strength saving throw (DC 18) or become prone.

the typical 5e language is: ...and the target must succeed on a DC 18 Strength saving throw or be knocked prone.

Erupt Earth: The World Soul chooses a 10 foot radius piece of ground within 120 ft. All creatures in the radius make a Dexterity saving throw (DC 18) or take 19 (3d12 bludgeoning damage). The area becomes difficult terrain.

the typical 5e language is: All creatures in the area must make DC 18 Dexterity saving throw or take 19 (3d12) bludgeoning damage. The area becomes difficult terrain.

I might suggest revising it to:
All creatures in the area must make DC 18 Dexterity saving throw, take 19 (3d12) bludgeoning damage on a failed save, or half as much damage on a successful one. The area becomes difficult terrain.

 

[dave2008]

Ok, here are some thoughts on World Soul:

1) I haven't look at offense yet, but I am getting a defensive CR of 13: 250 effective HP (BPS resistance) = 12 base + effective AC of 19 (+3 for automatic saves on three abilities). There is even an argument the effective HP could be higher because of the 3 condition immunities.

2) This one is weird because the strength is so far outside its CR range, but for some reason you haven't figured that into its attack bonus and over calculated its damage bonus and grapple escape DC. With the divine mind, the ultra high ability score was less problematic, but here it seems a bit all over. I think you need to use that high strength consistently first, and then maybe add somethings on top of that to get the effects you want.

3) Some non-5e-standard language as I mentioned in my previous post.

4) Stone Grasp: this basically a standard grapple with end of turn added and two targets added. Could be a trait. It does seem OP because of the high DC because of World's Strength. I think that trait might need to be looked. Maybe it has expertise in athletics instead of auto 20?

5) Hammer Throw mentions Stone Grip, should be Stone Grasp I assume? This is a strange action. I would suggest changing this to be more like the standard throw action, like Kraken's Fling:

Fling. One Large or smaller object held or creature grappled by the kraken is thrown up to 60 feet in a random direction and knocked prone. If a thrown target strikes a solid surface, the target takes 3 (1d6) bludgeoning damage for every 10 feet it was thrown. If the target is thrown at another creature, that creature must succeed on a DC 18 Dexterity saving throw or take the same damage and be knocked prone.

6) World binding, nice method to handle flying attacks, reminds me of the 4e tarrasque

7) I don't see any escape option for this guy or a method to help against ranged attacks. I think a teleport-like action that uses the earth, Or maybe it should have a burrow speed or something like the earth elemental's

Earth Glide. The elemental can burrow through nonmagical, unworked earth and stone. While doing so, the elemental doesn't disturb the material it moves through.

I like the concept of this guy, but feel it needs cleaned up a bit. It is so unbalanced it is a hard one to figure.

 

[dave2008]

OK some thoughts about the Fate Shaper:

1) This is an odd for sure. I have the same issue with the defensive CR calculation as the previous one. It seems you are not using "effective" hit points when calculating the Defensive CR. Also, Reform Self is really hard to figure. Maybe replace that action with a version of the regenerate trait.

2) Some suggestions in bold red. In addition, if the target is stunned then restrained is redundant. Everything it does is already covered by stunned. Also, if it is stunned it can't escape because it can't take actions. From your description I don't think that is your intent. Maybe dropped the stunned condition?

Chains of Fate. The Fate Shaper creates magical chains and makes the following attack: Melee Weapon Attack: +7 to hit, reach 20 ft., one target. Hit: 12 (2d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage. If the target is Large or smaller it must succeed on a DC 15 Strength saving throw or is grappled (escape DC 15), wrapped in chains. A grappled target is restrained and stunned until it released from the chains. Another creature can free the target from the chains using the same check.

3) I would revise this as follows.
Slip. The fate Shaper magically teleports, along with any equipment it is wearing and carrying, up to 60 feet to an unoccupied space he can see.

Not 100% sure on this one, but maybe:
Slippery Defense: When the fate shaper is the target of an attack, it can use its Slip action to teleport and the attack is automatically a miss.

Chains: The fate shaper can make one Chains of Fate attack.
el: If an attack targets an ally within 60 ft of the Fate Shaper, but before the attack is rolled, the Fate Shaper may use his slip ability to move adjacent to the target, and become the new target of the attack.
Fate Shift: The fate shaper can use its Slip action.

 

[Stalker0]

And now thank you for your feedback!

Defensive: base 11 + 4 for effective AC of 25 (22 +2 for 3 saves per DMG +1 for auto saves) = 15

• Offensive: base 12 + 1 for effective attack of 11 (I gave it +3 for advantage) = 13

The defensive base is actually 8 for 180 hp, then +4 would be 12, and I could easily see it being 13 for the extra extra special saves. So it seems CR 13 is in the ballpark.

2) I would like to see some skills, I would at least go with perception. But I could see these guys having a lot.

I do give the advantage on all ability checks, so they do have a major skill boost from that, but I see no reason not to top them off with a big skill boost, with an int like that you would expect

5) I like the Pillar of divinity. Lots of options with that. However, since it is always up it might be a bit strong or you might need to figure that 14 HP like regeneration. I would also prefer that you list what the pillar does rather than refer to a spell. But I get it.

So I look at what would happen if he gave up 2 attacks to activate the pillar and then got the equivalent of Regeneration 14 (its not exactly like regeneration because you can still die in the pillar but its close). The Offensive CR drops from 13 to 12 and the Defensive CR increases from 12 to 14. So it looks like I'm still dancing around CR 13 regardless.

I like my legendries to change the battlefield a bit, so I'll leave it as is and try it out.

6) Divine Memory: Again I prefer you tell me what it does than refer to a spell. More so because it doesn't have any spellcasting trait I'm not expecting to have to look up spells.

Overall a very interesting challenge. I look forward to looking at the rest of them.

Can do!

Seismic Slam: Melee Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, reach 5 ft., one target. Hit: 20 (2d6 + 13) bludgeoning damage and the target must succeed on a Strength saving throw (DC 18) or become prone.

the typical 5e language is: ...and the target must succeed on a DC 18 Strength saving throw or be knocked prone.

Thanks for the proof reads there, I'll clean them up.

Erupt Earth: The World Soul chooses a 10 foot radius piece of ground within 120 ft. All creatures in the radius make a Dexterity saving throw (DC 18) or take 19 (3d12 bludgeoning damage). The area becomes difficult terrain.

the typical 5e language is: All creatures in the area must make DC 18 Dexterity saving throw or take 19 (3d12) bludgeoning damage. The area becomes difficult terrain.

I might suggest revising it to:
All creatures in the area must make DC 18 Dexterity saving throw, take 19 (3d12) bludgeoning damage on a failed save, or half as much damage on a successful one. The area becomes difficult terrain.

I actually used the exact wording of the spell Erupting Earth, which does not give a half damage effect, but having one gives him options so I am game.

Ok, here are some thoughts on World Soul:

1) I haven't look at offense yet, but I am getting a defensive CR of 13: 250 effective HP (BPS resistance) = 12 base + effective AC of 19 (+3 for automatic saves on three abilities). There is even an argument the effective HP could be higher because of the 3 condition immunities.

I mentioned out the top that I am not factoring in the BPS resistance at all, as at these levels my group always has magic weapons. Since we are looking at adding it to your gallery I am 100% ok with just removing the BPS resistance to keep the math clean.

2) This one is weird because the strength is so far outside its CR range, but for some reason you haven't figured that into its attack bonus and over calculated its damage bonus and grapple escape DC. With the divine mind, the ultra high ability score was less problematic, but here it seems a bit all over. I think you need to use that high strength consistently first, and then maybe add somethings on top of that to get the effects you want.

Ack! I dropped my attack bonus at the last moment to allow me to add more damage, and now I remember why I had the attack in the first place, a +14 = +10 str + 4 proficiency. So I can go back, though that drops my damage back I'll have to look.

4) Stone Grasp: this basically a standard grapple with end of turn added and two targets added. Could be a trait. It does seem OP because of the high DC because of World's Strength. I think that trait might need to be looked. Maybe it has expertise in athletics instead of auto 20?

So this is where the design leaves the standard monster. I am making these monsters with the intentional idea that they are OP in specific ways. The goal is to ensure party's can't just fight these guys the normal way....that way lies madness. With the World Soul....fighting him in melee is nigh insanity, and I wanted to reflect that.

That said, I could probably give him advantage on athletics check (I used a barbarian for some of the thoughts of the monster anyway). A +14 with advantage is going to be auto success a good portion of the time, but its not a guaranteed your screwed. I'll ponder it, I really like the concept that he is just inescapable....but that is more of a 3e mindset than a 5e one.

7) I don't see any escape option for this guy or a method to help against ranged attacks. I think a teleport-like action that uses the earth, Or maybe it should have a burrow speed or something like the earth elemental's

Earth Glide. The elemental can burrow through nonmagical, unworked earth and stone. While doing so, the elemental doesn't disturb the material it moves through.

This was intentional. I made this guy ridiculous in melee with the balance of weaker against ranged attacks and limited maneuverability. He does have a 50 speed which can help him get out of trouble, but not too special. I also wanted to make sure it wasn't too like an earth elemental, there are already very strong similarities anyway.

OK some thoughts about the Fate Shaper:

1) This is an odd for sure. I have the same issue with the defensive CR calculation as the previous one. It seems you are not using "effective" hit points when calculating the Defensive CR. Also, Reform Self is really hard to figure. Maybe replace that action with a version of the regenerate trait.

Reform Self is flavorwise (from my story) the absolute core part of the character, so I will hold onto it for dear life unless I have to be rid of it. Again going back to what I said about the world soul....Enforcers are intentional imbalanced in specific ways...they are each designed to be extremely difficult to fight unless you smartly adapt to the tactics. A party that does not aggressively attack this enforcer is going to hugely pay for that, and that is very intentional. On the other hand, a simple hypnotic pattern or hold person could end this guy with barely a whimper. It does of course make usual CR balance incredibly tricky.

2) Some suggestions in bold red. In addition, if the target is stunned then restrained is redundant. Everything it does is already covered by stunned. Also, if it is stunned it can't escape because it can't take actions. From your description I don't think that is your intent. Maybe dropped the stunned condition?

Chains of Fate. The Fate Shaper creates magical chains and makes the following attack: Melee Weapon Attack: +7 to hit, reach 20 ft., one target. Hit: 12 (2d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage. If the target is Large or smaller it must succeed on a DC 15 Strength saving throw or is grappled (escape DC 15), wrapped in chains. A grappled target is restrained and stunned until it released from the chains. Another creature can free the target from the chains using the same check.

3) I would revise this as follows.
Slip. The fate Shaper magically teleports, along with any equipment it is wearing and carrying, up to 60 feet to an unoccupied space he can see.

Not 100% sure on this one, but maybe:
Slippery Defense: When the fate shaper is the target of an attack, it can use its Slip action to teleport and the attack is automatically a miss.

Chains: The fate shaper can make one Chains of Fate attack.
el: If an attack targets an ally within 60 ft of the Fate Shaper, but before the attack is rolled, the Fate Shaper may use his slip ability to move adjacent to the target, and become the new target of the attack.
Fate Shift: The fate shaper can use its Slip action.

Much cleaner language, thank you, I will incorporate!

 

[dave2008]

The defensive base is actually 8 for 180 hp, then +4 would be 12, and I could easily see it being 13 for the extra extra special saves. So it seems CR 13 is in the ballpark.

The effective HP is 225 because of your BPS resistance, so that is a base 11 +4 gets you to 15.

I do give the advantage on all ability checks, so they do have a major skill boost from that, but I see no reason not to top them off with a big skill boost, with an int like that you would expect

I think so too.

So I look at what would happen if he gave up 2 attacks to activate the pillar and then got the equivalent of Regeneration 14 (its not exactly like regeneration because you can still die in the pillar but its close). The Offensive CR drops from 13 to 12 and the Defensive CR increases from 12 to 14. So it looks like I'm still dancing around CR 13 regardless.

I'm not exactly following you. Once this is used it stays up. So the enforcer can enter it every round and get the 14 HP like regeneration. I would think you add 28 HP to the effective HP, but maybe not.

I actually used the exact wording of the spell Erupting Earth, which does not give a half damage effect, but having one gives him options so I am game.

That was just a suggestion. Regardless, just an FYI, spell language is different than monster language typical. Similar, but subtle differences.

I mentioned out the top that I am not factoring in the BPS resistance at all, as at these levels my group always has magic weapons. Since we are looking at adding it to your gallery I am 100% ok with just removing the BPS resistance to keep the math clean.

OK, I missed that. I've been discussing BPS resistance and providing a tier approach based on magic item rarity. You can see it here. Maybe we can use that concept here.

So this is where the design leaves the standard monster. I am making these monsters with the intentional idea that they are OP in specific ways. The goal is to ensure party's can't just fight these guys the normal way....that way lies madness. With the World Soul....fighting him in melee is nigh insanity, and I wanted to reflect that.

That said, I could probably give him advantage on athletics check (I used a barbarian for some of the thoughts of the monster anyway). A +14 with advantage is going to be auto success a good portion of the time, but its not a guaranteed your screwed. I'll ponder it, I really like the concept that he is just inescapable....but that is more of a 3e mindset than a 5e one.

I like the non-standard design, it just makes them difficult to figure out (CR wise). Ya, that is definitely more a 3e mindset. I did a lot of monster design in 4e which has many of the same assumptions as 5e so I don't really have that mindset.

This was intentional. I made this guy ridiculous in melee with the balance of weaker against ranged attacks and limited maneuverability. He does have a 50 speed which can help him get out of trouble, but not too special. I also wanted to make sure it wasn't too like an earth elemental, there are already very strong similarities anyway.

OK, I just think that is a dangerous choice in 5e, which give you almost no reason to not be in ranged combat. I'm fine with though, like you said it is a give and take and its really part of its think to be "grounded"

Reform Self is flavorwise (from my story) the absolute core part of the character, so I will hold onto it for dear life unless I have to be rid of it. Again going back to what I said about the world soul....Enforcers are intentional imbalanced in specific ways...they are each designed to be extremely difficult to fight unless you smartly adapt to the tactics. A party that does not aggressively attack this enforcer is going to hugely pay for that, and that is very intentional. On the other hand, a simple hypnotic pattern or hold person could end this guy with barely a whimper. It does of course make usual CR balance incredibly tricky.

It does make it tricky. However, I'm not really understanding the flavor of this, can you clarify? Maybe we can get a similar effect a different way.

Much cleaner language, thank you, I will incorporate!

No worries!

 

[Stalker0]

It does make it tricky. However, I'm not really understanding the flavor of this, can you clarify? Maybe we can get a similar effect a different way.

hehe yeah this is the difficulty of translating a protaganist from a full story into a monster

For the Fate Shaper, effectively think of it as the old multi-verse idea. The Fate Shaper has an infinite well of them to draw from, so he can easily just switch to one where he zigged instead of zagged, and didn't take all that nasty damage from before. In effect, constantly replacing himself with another version of himself.

That said, even in my story there is a limit to how often he can do this (in the story he is actually drawing from his own soul...and so like any muscle it gets tired if you use it too often). So perhaps I could just put a simple 2/rest cap on it, to ensure it never goes completely nuts.

 

[dave2008]

hehe yeah this is the difficulty of translating a protaganist from a full story into a monster

For the Fate Shaper, effectively think of it as the old multi-verse idea. The Fate Shaper has an infinite well of them to draw from, so he can easily just switch to one where he zigged instead of zagged, and didn't take all that nasty damage from before. In effect, constantly replacing himself with another version of himself.

That said, even in my story there is a limit to how often he can do this (in the story he is actually drawing from his own soul...and so like any muscle it gets tired if you use it too often). So perhaps I could just put a simple 2/rest cap on it, to ensure it never goes completely nuts.

OK, that helps. From your description, it seems like something that should happen automatically and possibly be a trait and not an action. This makes it more powerful, but also easier to define CR wise. Maybe:

Reform Shelf (2/Rest). If the Fate Shaper is reduced to 0 hit points, it doesn’t die or fall unconscious. Instead it pulls a new body from an alternate reality (no action), all conditions and effects it is suffering end for it, and it regains 200 hit points,

I realize this probably blows your CR budget, but it it seems to fit what you describe better. This guys are so unique I would suggest making them what you want and just seeing where the CR chips fall. You can of course adjust that based on how many HP it has and how many it recovers with Reform Self.

However, please note that both your and my version of Reform Self could fall victim to Chill Touch. If you want to prevent that, perhaps cantrip immunity, which I have used before.

 

[dave2008]

Ack! I dropped my attack bonus at the last moment to allow me to add more damage, and now I remember why I had the attack in the first place, a +14 = +10 str + 4 proficiency. So I can go back, though that drops my damage back I'll have to look.

FYI, CR 13 is a +5 proficiency, so that should be +15 to hit and +10 to damage.

What about:

Physical Perfection. The World Soul automatically passes all strength, dexterity, and constitution saving throws. If there is an effect when these saves are passed, the World Soul does not suffer the effect. World Souls do not need to eat, drink, sleep, or breathe. Additionally, it adds it Strength, Dexterity, and Constitution modifiers to its melee attack damage on a hit (included in the attack).

World’s Strength. The World Soul has advantage on all Strength (Athletic) and Dexterity (Acrobatics) checks and it can long jump up to 100 ft when using the Dash action. Additionally, unless the World Soul wishes too, it cannot be pushed or pulled.

Also, forced movement isn't a condition, that is why I included in world's strength. I limited it to pushes and pulls, as those are the only forced movements in 5e. However, if you wanted that ability to apply to teleports and banishment, it wouldn't. Not sure if that was something you wanted or not and of course a DM might not interpret those as forced movement. You could possibly also require the World Soul to be in contact with the ground, if that fits the flavor of your story.

 

[Stalker0]

Also, forced movement isn't a condition, that is why I included in world's strength. I limited it to pushes and pulls, as those are the only forced movements in 5e. However, if you wanted that ability to apply to teleports and banishment, it wouldn't. Not sure if that was something you wanted or not and of course a DM might not interpret those as forced movement. You could possibly also require the World Soul to be in contact with the ground, if that fits the flavor of your story.

Good point, I like the idea of it preventing forced teleports and banishments, I will add that in.

Reform Shelf (2/Rest). If the Fate Shaper is reduced to 0 hit points, it doesn’t die or fall unconscious. Instead it pulls a new body from an alternate reality (no action), all conditions and effects it is suffering end for it, and it regains 200 hit points,

However, please note that both your and my version of Reform Self could fall victim to Chill Touch. If you want to prevent that, perhaps cantrip immunity, which I have used before.

Hmm, I think we are getting closer, though I do want action denial to play a part in the success of taking him down. So perhaps I make it a reaction...that way if a party successful denies reactions to the character they can cut through the ability.

By my strict reading, since we are saying "all effects it is suffering from end for it", than that would include chill touch as well. However if I DM wants to rule that chill touch works as a tactic I can get behind that, as the goal is for players to fight a little differently, and if a player gets rewarded for using a cantrip instead of a big attack to stop a bad guy that still does the job.

 

[Stalker0]

Alright made my updates!

1) Divine Mind: I went with most of the suggestions except for removing the Spell names and replace with language. Normally I would be all about that but the spell language is actually VERY LONG, and it would be quite a mouthful to put that in the stat block. Since there are two spells for the guy its the one enforcer that I expect the DM to look up some spells. Its not ideal, but neither is turing the stat block into a two pager.

2) World Soul: So I took a bit of the cap off this guy. In my story he is the strongest of the enforcers, so no reason not to bump up the CR (he is now offensive CR 19). I decided to push harder on the barbarian motif. For World's Strength, I gave him the 18th level barbarian ability indomitable might (so now his athletics checks at a 30). Instead of going for a minimum, I just made them a flat 30. This still gives him the feel of "absolute strength", but the lower max means there is still a chance a crazy strong barbarian PC might make it out of the grapple. At CR 19 that feels appropriate within flavor.

I also used your idea of adding con into to AC and damage, so I recalculated his AC and attacks. So overall he got a solid CR bump but I think it better captures the essence.

3) Fate Shaper: Ok so I took a page out of your mythic handbook, and went with that recovery model. However instead of getting stronger, he gets weaker by the loss of legendary actions. This represents the book flavor I wanted to keep (he gets tired from the use of that ability), and it is much easier to CR. It allows is a good way to showcase to the party that they are winning...otherwise it could be very discouraging to see the monster just "get back up". But once they see that's legendary actions have dropped....they know that they are winning. It also allows for the Divine Mind to recharge that ability, which is also something that the two could do in the story....which made them a particularly deadly combination.

I did add a +2 CR for battlemind on this one, since he gets a lot more out of a new legendary action than most enforcers do. I think this also properly reflects that a Fate Shaper is particularly dangerous when other enforcers are around to take advantage of the stuns.

4) I did a gender neutral pass on the text as well.

 

[dave2008]

Alright made my updates!

1) Divine Mind: I went with most of the suggestions except for removing the Spell names and replace with language. Normally I would be all about that but the spell language is actually VERY LONG, and it would be quite a mouthful to put that in the stat block. Since there are two spells for the guy its the one enforcer that I expect the DM to look up some spells. Its not ideal, but neither is turing the stat block into a two pager.

2) World Soul: So I took a bit of the cap off this guy. In my story he is the strongest of the enforcers, so no reason not to bump up the CR (he is now offensive CR 19). I decided to push harder on the barbarian motif. For World's Strength, I gave him the 18th level barbarian ability indomitable might (so now his athletics checks at a 30). Instead of going for a minimum, I just made them a flat 30. This still gives him the feel of "absolute strength", but the lower max means there is still a chance a crazy strong barbarian PC might make it out of the grapple. At CR 19 that feels appropriate within flavor.

I also used your idea of adding con into to AC and damage, so I recalculated his AC and attacks. So overall he got a solid CR bump but I think it better captures the essence.

3) Fate Shaper: Ok so I took a page out of your mythic handbook, and went with that recovery model. However instead of getting stronger, he gets weaker by the loss of legendary actions. This represents the book flavor I wanted to keep (he gets tired from the use of that ability), and it is much easier to CR. It allows is a good way to showcase to the party that they are winning...otherwise it could be very discouraging to see the monster just "get back up". But once they see that's legendary actions have dropped....they know that they are winning. It also allows for the Divine Mind to recharge that ability, which is also something that the two could do in the story....which made them a particularly deadly combination.

I did add a +2 CR for battlemind on this one, since he gets a lot more out of a new legendary action than most enforcers do. I think this also properly reflects that a Fate Shaper is particularly dangerous when other enforcers are around to take advantage of the stuns.

4) I did a gender neutral pass on the text as well.

Looks good!

 

[Stalker0]

Great. So to go in your gallery, do I need to post them anywhere or change the format?

 

[dave2008]

Great. So to go in your gallery, do I need to post them anywhere or change the format?

No, I will just link to them in the ToC. However, if you could post each in its own post in this thread without a spoiler that would be great. It makes it easier for people who are clicking on the links. Something like this maybe:

Divine Mind: For this enforcer, the gods bound a mortal mind to the heavens itself, unlocking divine power and the strength of absolute knowledge. Divine Minds are warriors guided by an intellect so great that they can practically see the future as well as the as the True form of their enemies. Their minds can shape the power of the divine into actual weapons and armor, or use it to heal wounds or harm enemies. A Divine Mind is constantly shifting on the battleground, one minute striking with a large blade, the next firing long range arrows...and then shifting into defensive shields to resist attack. But if attacks fail, the Divine Mind can call upon its greatest and most terrifying weapon, the ability to reshape the mind itself.

Divine Mind
Medium humanoid (enforcer)

Armor Class 22 (Plate +1, Shield +1)
Hit Points 180
Speed 30 ft.

STR	DEX	CON	INT	WIS	CHA
15 (+2)	15 (+2)	15 (+2)	30 (+10)	20 (+5)	20 (+5)

Skills: *See Intelligent Insight
Saving Throws: *See Mental Perfection
Senses Truesight 100 ft., passive perception 19
Challenge 13 (Offensive

Battlemind. For every additional Enforcer in the encounter, the Divine Mind gains a legendary action, and its CR increases by 1.

Mental Perfection. The Divine Mind automatically passes all intelligence, wisdom, and charisma saving throws. If there is an effect when those saves are passed, the Divine Mind does not suffer the effect.

Open Mind. The Divine Mind automatically sees the thoughts of any creature within 100 ft, as if they failed a saving throw against the Detect Thoughts spell. Effects that block the spell block this effect.

Intelligent Insight. The Divine Mind has advantage on all attacks and has a critical range of 18-20. The Divine Mind has advantage and a +4 bonus on all ability checks and possesses a perfect memory.

Arsenal of Light. The Divine Mind can summon any armor, shield, or weapon, and can freely switch between them at any time (statblock provides some standard options, and assumes the best armor and shield). Such weapons are magical, deal radiant damage, and ignore the Damage Threshold of objects and creatures. The equipment disappears if it leaves the Divine Mind’s hand.

ACTIONS
Multiattack. The Divine Mind makes 2 attacks, any combination of Greatsword, Halberd, or Longbow.

Greatsword, Melee Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, reach 5 ft., one target. Hit: 14 (2d6 + 7) radiant damage. The Divine Mind may take a -5 to the attack roll and add +10 damage.

Halberd. Melee Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, reach 10 ft., one target. Hit: 12 (1d10 + 7) radiant damage.

Longbow. Ranged Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, range: 600., one target. Hit: 11 (1d8 + 7) radiant damage. This attack ignores half and 3/4 cover.

REACTIONS
Double Shield Defense: When an attack is made, but before the result is known, the Divine Mind can summon two large tower shields, granting +5 to AC to themself and any adjacent ally. This bonus lasts until the Divine Mind takes another Action or Legendary Action.

Halberd Defense: Whenever a creature moves within 10 ft of the Divine Mind, the Divine Mind may make a Halberd attack.

LEGENDARY ACTIONS
The enforcer can take 3 legendary actions, choosing from the options below. Only one legendary action option can be used at a time and only at the end of another creature's turn. The enforcer regains spent legendary actions at the start of its turn.

Angelic Attack: The Divine Mind may make a Greatsword, Halberd, or Longsword attack
Pillar of Divinity (Costs 2 Actions): The Divine Mind summons a pillar of light with a 5 foot radius anywhere within 60 feet. Any ally (including the Divine Mind) that enters the pillar during their turn or starts their turn in the pillar heals 14 (4d6) damage and gains the effect of a Greater Restoration.

Any enemy instead takes 14 (4d6) radiant damage, and an enemy undead of CR 3 or lower must make a DC 18 wisdom saving throw or be destroyed. The pillar lasts until the ability is used again or the end of the Divine Mind's next turn.
Divine Memory (Costs 3 Actions): The Divine Mind casts Modify Memory (9th level, DC 18)

PS It would be nice if the enforcer lore was its own post too.

 

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Divine Mind: For this enforcer, the gods bound a mortal mind to the heavens itself, unlocking divine power and the strength of absolute knowledge. Divine Minds are warriors guided by an intellect so great that they can practically see the future as well as the as the True form of their enemies. Their minds can shape the power of the divine into actual weapons and armor, or use it to heal wounds or harm enemies. A Divine Mind is constantly shifting on the battleground, one minute striking with a large blade, the next firing long range arrows...and then shifting into defensive shields to resist attack. But if attacks fail, the Divine Mind can call upon its greatest and most terrifying weapon, the ability to reshape the mind itself.

Divine Mind
Medium Humanoid (Enforcer)

Armor Class 22 (Plate +1, Shield +1)
Hit Points 180
Speed 30 ft.

STR	DEX	CON	INT	WIS	CHA
15 (+2)	15 (+2)	15 (+2)	30 (+10)	20 (+5)	20 (+5)

Skills: *See Intelligent Insight
Saving Throws: *See Mental Perfection
Senses Truesight 100 ft., passive perception 19
Challenge 13 (Offensive CR 14, Defense CR 12)

Battlemind: For every additional Enforcer in the encounter, the Divine Mind gains a legendary action, and its CR increases by 1.

Mental Perfection: The Divine Mind automatically passes all intelligence, wisdom, and charisma saving throws. If there is an effect when those saves are passed, the Divine Mind does not suffer the effect.

Open Mind: The Divine Mind automatically sees the thoughts of any creature within 100 ft, as if they failed a saving throw against the Detect Thoughts spell. Effects that block the spell block this effect.

Intelligent Insight: The Divine Mind has advantage on all attacks and has a critical range of 18-20. The Divine Mind has advantage and a +4 bonus on all ability checks and possesses a perfect memory.

Arsenal of Light: The Divine Mind can summon any armor, shield, or weapon, and can freely switch between them at any time (statblock provides some standard options, and assumes the best armor and shield). Such weapons are magical, deal radiant damage, and ignore the Damage Threshold of objects and creatures. The equipment disappears if it leaves the Divine Mind’s hand.

ACTIONS

Multiattack: The Divine Mind makes 2 attacks, any combination of Greatsword, Halberd, or Longbow.

Great Sword: Melee Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, reach 5 ft., one target. Hit: 14 (2d6 + 7) radiant damage. The Divine Mind may take a -5 to the attack roll and add +10 damage.

Halberd: Melee Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, reach 10 ft., one target. Hit: 12 (1d10 + 7) radiant damage.

Longbow: Ranged Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, range: 600., one target. Hit: 11 (1d8 + 7) radiant damage. This attack ignores half and 3/4 cover.


REACTIONS

Double Shield Defense: When an attack is made, but before the result is known, the Divine Mind can summon two large tower shields, granting +5 to AC to themself and any adjacent ally. This bonus lasts until the Divine Mind takes another Action or Legendary Action.

Halberd Defense: Whenever a creature moves within 10 ft of the Divine Mind, the Divine Mind may make a Halberd attack.


LEGENDARY ACTIONS (3)

Angelic Attack: The Divine Mind may make a Greatsword, Halberd, or Longsword attack

Pillar of Divinity (2): The Divine Mind summons a pillar of light with a 5 foot radius anywhere within 60 feet. Any ally (including the Divine Mind) that enters the pillar during their turn or starts their turn in the pillar heals 14 (4d6) damage and gains the effect of a Greater Restoration.

Any enemy instead takes 14 (4d6) radiant damage, and an enemy undead of CR 3 or lower must make a DC 18 wisdom saving throw or be destroyed. The pillar lasts until the ability is used again or the end of the Divine Mind's next turn.

Divine Memory (3): The Divine Mind casts Modify Memory (9th level, DC 18)

 

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World Soul: This enforcer's body was bound to an entire world, granting it unparalleled physical power. Feeding off the world's energy, a World Soul needs no nourishment, and never tires in its duty. The World Soul has a strength unrivaled, the strength of the world itself.

To fight a World Soul you must also fight the ground, for it erupts at the slightest command. Never tiring, they are relentless until they have met their goal.

World Soul
Medium Humanoid (Enforcer)

Armor Class 20 (natural armor)
Hit Points 200
Speed 50 ft.

STR	DEX	CON	INT	WIS	CHA
30 (+10)	20 (+5)	20 (+5)	15 (+2)	15 (+2)	15 (+2)

Skills: Athletics (*See World’s Strength), Acrobatics +10
Saving Throws *See Physical Perfection
Condition Immunities Prone, Exhaustion
Senses Tremorsense 500 ft., passive perception 12
Challenge 16 (Offensive CR 19, Defense CR 13)

Battlemind: For every additional Enforcer in the encounter, the World Soul gains a legendary action, and its CR increases by 1.

Physical Perfection: The World Soul automatically passes all strength, dexterity, and constitution saving throws. If there is an effect when these saves are passed, the World Soul does not suffer the effect.

One with the World: The World Soul ignores difficult terrain.

Unending Power: World Souls do not need to eat, drink, sleep, or breathe. When the World soul takes a long rest, if it is touching the ground, it need only rest for 1 minute to gain the benefit.

Absolute Immobility: When the World Soul is touching the ground, unless it wishes, no effect can move it from its current position. This includes teleportation and banishment effects.

World’s Might: The World Soul always has a result of 30 on any strength check, and can long jump up to 100 ft when using the dash action. World Souls add their constitution modifier to their unarmored AC and melee attacks (included in statistics).


ACTIONS
Multiattack: The World Soul can make two attacks: Any combination of Seismic Strike and Grapple.

Seismic Slam: Melee Weapon Attack: +15 to hit, reach 5 ft., one target. Hit: 19 (1d8 + 15) bludgeoning damage and the target must succeed on a DC 19 Strength saving throw or be knocked prone

Grapple: The World Soul begins a grapple with a target of any size within 5 ft.

Erupt Earth: The World Soul chooses a 10 foot radius piece of ground within 120 ft. All creatures in the area must make a DC 19 Dexterity saving throw, take 19 (3d12) bludgeoning damage on a failed save, or half as much damage on a successful one. The area becomes difficult terrain.


LEGENDARY ACTIONS (3)

Indomitable Grip: Make a Grapple or Seismic Slam attack

Hammer Throw: One grappled creature is thrown 60 feet and knocked prone. If a thrown target strikes the ground or a solid surface, the target takes 21 (6d6) bludgeoning damage. If the target is thrown at another creature, the creature must succeed on a DC 19 Dexterity saving throw or take the same damage and be knocked prone.

World Binding: A target within 300 ft must succeed on a DC 19 Strength saving throw or its flying speed (if any) is reduced to 0 feet for 1 minute. An airborne creature safely descends at 60 feet per round until it reaches the ground for until 1 minute.

Earthquake (Cost: 3 Actions): The World Soul uses the Erupt Earth action, except the area is changed to a 100 ft radius around the World Soul.

 

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Fate Shaper: For this enforcer, the gods bound the mortal...to itself. Gaining complete control over its own life, the Fate Shaper is able to reach back into its past and alter any choices it has ever made. By making the best possible choices, the Fate Shaper becomes the perfection of the mortal form, carrying the best stats that a mortal could hope to achieve. In addition, a Fate Shaper's position is simply the result of a past choice, one easily changed. This allows a Fate Shaper to change position easily and endlessly.

While the Fate Shaper cannot alter the fates of other creatures, it can use its power to deny them choice at all... turning creatures into stunned vegetables.

To fight a Fate Shaper is not to fight 1, but 1000 lives. Constantly shifting and reforming, any damage the Fate Shaper feels is but a momentary inconvenience. As such they fight fearlessly, often rushing around the edges of battle, willing to absorb attacks meant for their allies, knowing that in a slightly altered life, they will take no damage at all.


Fate Shaper
Medium Humanoid (Enforcer)

Armor Class 17 (Leather Armor)
Hit Points 100
Speed 30 ft.

STR	DEX	CON	INT	WIS	CHA
20 (+5)	20 (+5)	20 (+5)	20 (+5)	20 (+5)	20 (+5)

Senses blind sense 200 ft., passive perception 15
Challenge 13 (Offensive CR 9, Defense CR 16)

Battlemind: For every additional Enforcer in the encounter, the Fate Shaper gains a legendary action, and its CR increases by 2.

Alertness: The Fate Shaper gains +5 to initiative and can’t be surprised.

Fate Sight: The Fate Shaper can tell if any creature within 200 ft is alive or dead.

Protected Life: The Fate Shaper is immune from any effect that instantly kills it, reduces its maximum hp, or prevents healing.

Arsenal of Destiny: The Fate Shaper can create chains instantly and at will. These chains disappear if a person who has been grappled in them is freed.

Reform Self: When the Fate Shaper is reduced to 0 hitpoints and possesses legendary actions, it doesn't die or fall unconscious. Instead, all conditions and effects it is suffering end for it, it regains 100 hp, permanently loses 1 legendary action, and can immediately take the Slip action. An effect or rest that can remove 1 level of exhaustion can return a legendary action lost in this way.


ACTIONS
Multiattack: The Fate Shaper can make two attacks: Chains of Fate twice, or Slip and Chains of Fate.

Chains of Fate. Melee Weapon Attack: +8 to hit, reach 10 ft., one target. Hit: 12 (2d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage. If the target is Large or smaller, it must succeed on a DC 16 Strength saving throw or is grappled (escape DC 16), wrapped in chains. A grappled target is stunned until released from the chains. Another creature can free the target from the chains using the same check.

Slip. The fate Shaper magically teleports, along with any equipment it is wearing and carrying, up to 60 feet to an unoccupied space it can see.


REACTIONS
Slippery Defense: When the fate shaper is the target of an attack, it can use its Slip action to teleport and the attack is automatically a miss.

Sentinel: If an attack targets an ally within 60 ft of the Fate Shaper, but before the attack is rolled, the Fate Shaper may use his slip ability to move adjacent to the target, and become the new target of the attack.


LEGENDARY ACTIONS (2)

Chains: The fate shaper can make one Chains of Fate attack.

Fate Shift: The fate shaper can use its Slip action.