New Member and Artist

[Lalato]

Nice work... You've done a great job... I guess the only critique I can offer is that the proportion seems to be a bit off here and there, but that can be attributed to style. I know that's not saying much, but I really dig your work.

As for the color piece... that goblin is a bit too green for my taste... but again, that's a matter of taste. If you're after a definite Green Goblin from Spider-Man type look, you have a achieved it.

--sam

 

[apalmer]

....the proportion seems to be a bit off here and there....

yeah...I agree...I feel it's more prevelant in the dwarf pic (Grom's Hammer). While I purposely went to the extreme on his hands the smallish feet and jacked up leg was not intentional...it's definately something I need to tighten up. Thanks

........I know that's not saying much, but I really dig your work.

No...actually thats saying alot....thank you!

........that goblin is a bit too green for my taste...

What would you reccomend....maybe a little more grey?


Thanks for commenting...keep it coming.

Allen

 

[Oni]

Hey welcome to the board.

Pretty cool stuff. I checked out your gallery, the Orc Warrior looks good in colour, and I thought the battle mage was pretty nifty too, especially since anytime I try to use dynamic foreshortening it looks crappy and so I appreciate seeing it done well.

 

[apalmer]

Hey welcome to the board.

Pretty cool stuff. I checked out your gallery, the Orc Warrior looks good in colour, and I thought the battle mage was pretty nifty too, especially since anytime I try to use dynamic foreshortening it looks crappy and so I appreciate seeing it done well.

Thanks Oni....foreshortening had been one of the few things that have come naturally for me, though maybe not always accurate. I found what helped for me is just going big and bold....thrusting the forward limb at the observer...dunno...makes it a bit more fun too.

I appreciate you visiting my gallery...any advice ore recommendation you have would be greatly appreciated.

Allen

 

[Sonikal]

Fantastic artwork mate, the massive Orc warrior is great. RPG companies hire this guy!. Will you be taking any requests?...

 

[apalmer]

Fantastic artwork mate, the massive Orc warrior is great. RPG companies hire this guy!. Will you be taking any requests?...

Thanks Sonical....yes I do intend to take in some requests but I have responded to a couple of threads already that are in need of artwork and I'm kinda back-logged...what did you have in mind?

Heres another piece of mine that hasn't found it's way to my En World Gallery!

 

[Tanager]

Very impressive. While some of it, mostly the color work, I find a bit too cartoony for my taste there's no deying the ability behind them.

That lizard man you posted is excellent.

 

[apalmer]

..... some of it, mostly the color work, I find a bit too cartoony ....

hmmm.....you're right....how's this?

 

[Sonikal]

Thanks Sonical....yes I do intend to take in some requests but I have responded to a couple of threads already that are in need of artwork and I'm kinda back-logged...what did you have in mind?

Heres another piece of mine that hasn't found it's way to my En World Gallery!

If your busy I wont bother you. I understand how you feel, im an artist myself and at the moment i've got 4 tasks...

1) Draw a masked pirate called Wesely (not my concept!) for a contest.
2) Draw a request for a pint-sized Dragonstar lab freak.
3) Draw a biological journalist-like skecthings of the flora and fauna of a weird setting called Vahevia.
4) Draw some of vahevias intelligent races.

*phew!, thats a lot of drawing!...

 

[Tanager]

hmmm.....you're right....how's this?

A little color de-saturation goes a long way. I think it's a vast improvement.

But in regards to my previous comment, it's merely an issue of personnal taste and not something that should nessessarily be taken to heart.