I like the Geography page, but I would suggest making the first paragraph less technical, and a little thicker in detail. The section opens with a very general section, which is great. However, it talks in degrees and latitudes which mean very little to me and, I suspect, to most any reader. I suggest that instead the analogy-system would be used. "Brennan is roughly the size of North America and Gerin is roughly the size of Australia." is a great sentence. Saying "Brennan is a wide continent that spans a diverse climate from an ice cap at its north to jungles at the south", however, works better for me than "these two continents span roughly 70 degrees of latitude" [I hope I remember the climates right]. What about changing the first paragraph to something more like: Something like that? (I'm sure I've got things a bit wrong, but I think in terms of style it works better when it's less technical.)