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<blockquote data-quote="Morrus" data-source="post: 5193580" data-attributes="member: 1">For those interested, I've attached the current manuscript for Paragons of the Burning Sky.&nbsp;It's important to note that this is very much a draft copy; it's my own first attempt at writing 4E mechanics, and as such is fairly unbalanced as it is. Comments are welcomed!&nbsp;You'll note it's still in the revision stage (and as such you can see notes and alterations on it). It's by no means a final product; however I'm aware that some of you are interested in this manuscript and others have offered to help with it, so here it is for your viewing pleasure. &nbsp;Just don't mock me too much... it's my first time! At least now you can see why I pay other people to do this stuff. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />&nbsp;[Edit - updated with some of the suggestions below].[Edit 2 - updated again with some of RW's suggestions].[Edit 3 - updated May 28][Edit 4 - updated May 29 with &quot;Sights of Dassen&quot;]</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Morrus, post: 5193580, member: 1"] For those interested, I've attached the current manuscript for [I]Paragons of the Burning Sky[/I]. It's important to note that this is very much a draft copy; it's my own first attempt at writing 4E mechanics, and as such is fairly unbalanced as it is. Comments are welcomed! You'll note it's still in the revision stage (and as such you can see notes and alterations on it). It's by no means a final product; however I'm aware that some of you are interested in this manuscript and others have offered to help with it, so here it is for your viewing pleasure. Just don't mock me too much... it's my first time! At least now you can see why I pay [I]other [/I]people to do this stuff. :) [I][Edit - updated with some of the suggestions below].[/I] [I][Edit 2 - updated again with some of RW's suggestions].[/I] [I][Edit 3 - updated May 28][/I] [I][Edit 4 - updated May 29 with "Sights of Dassen"][/I] [/QUOTE]

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