Really, what I could see of it was quite nice. I understand you had to scrunch it down a little bit. I'd like to see a bigger version, if you don't mind.
I'll second the request for a larger version. But what I can see of the smaller version, I really like your graphic presentation. That's a very nice composition. The fine detail work and the obvious care you put into your pen & ink work really shows through.
I like how you've achieved value through texture, and the nice varied line weight keeping the figures and shapes distinct. I would like to see you push the value ranges a little more, but that's not a complaint so much as a suggestion.
