Good storytelling. The narrative had a good flow. I like Sund's quirky humor and smoldering anger.
What's the character's motivation to be an adventurer? Does this fit Kalstad's demand to find roguish followers? Is there anything else burning inside Sund that drives him forward and kept him from giving up in the prison?
One nitpick - "form of a form" jumped out at me while reading.
Cool story. Look forward to more.
What's the character's motivation to be an adventurer? Does this fit Kalstad's demand to find roguish followers? Is there anything else burning inside Sund that drives him forward and kept him from giving up in the prison?
One nitpick - "form of a form" jumped out at me while reading.
Cool story. Look forward to more.