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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Sravoff" data-source="post: 2545101" data-attributes="member: 33724">Very well done on race craft. I very much liek and will be featured in my next campaign. I have a few minor changes problems.TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTAmpibious: gives water breathin for two points. I would change this. Make it one point and make them good at holding breath, double their con. Most amphibians hold their breath and breath air, I am pretty sure.Create the water breathing ability for two points.TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEidet Memory: I would drop the +4 racial bonus cause it sounds a bit more like a class ability. Then I would change it so character got a +2 in all knowledge skills they have ranks in. May need a name change.TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTFins, may or may not need to ahve the odd shaped body flaw, are tails odd shaped body worthy?TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTFlight costs a whole lot to get anything good and is pretty much too good for a +0 LA race, I know that has come up before so I gues DM just gets veto power....TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTSpell like abilites. These do not have any components, but do provoke Aoa and can be cast defensivly as normal spells. That is what the MM says, you ma want it to work differently but gnomes work like this.TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTI would drop perephrial vision, or make it so they get only +1, you get half you dex bonus and their SA only work 75% of the time, you may make this 50%, not sure...TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTStrong Stomach is cool, glad you thought of it!TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTI would make dropping a physical score only give you two points instead of three.TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTVery Nice work over all though, glad you made it!-Sravoff</blockquote>

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