Raymond E. Feist

[The_Khan]

Here is the penciled and inked cover to Raymond E. Feist, The Woodboy, it has yet to be colored, but I wanted to give you all a sneek peek, enjoy

 

[Storn]

Here is the penciled and inked cover to Raymond E. Feist, The Woodboy, it has yet to be colored, but I wanted to give you all a sneek peek, enjoy

Awesome!!!

My one nitpick (knew there had to be one) and this is the most minuscule of nitpicks, but I thought it. So I'm gonna write it. Don't change it, but file under "next time".

The compound is awfully perfect and level and square. It just feels like that manor should be pushed back on the grounds for a modern sensability. But if you are going for a decidedly non-modern look, then bring it forward a tad, then make the "back yard" more of a parade ground. Maybe a flagpole, a dirty area of much marching and training. Something, a bit of a hill.

The levelness of it doesn't jibe with the wonderful, wonderful landscape.

I'm picky ain't I? sorry dude for even bringing it up.

 

[The_Khan]

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That's some very good feedback. You have a very good eye for detail, my friend. Thanks, greatly appreciated