Rel's Faded Glory III: Glory Reborn (FINAL UPDATE 6/22 - SHE'S DONE, BABY!!)

Thread Hijack...

Rel,

Swing by the Rat's Nest and drop by the new "Imperial Dispatch"...the forum for all things Faded Glory. The direct link is in my .sig and the general link to the Rat's Nest is:

http://www.aquerra.com/phpbb/index.php

Feel free to use the Imperial Dispatch for discussions on your campaign, if you like and let me know if you want me to sticky an item or three.

~ Old One
 

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Tony Vargas said:
Must've missed that one...

Well allow me to introduce you:

http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=29529

And a note about my story hour in general:

I've decided that I'm getting too hung up on the idea that I've got to set aside a sizable chunk of time to write out my updates in discreet blocks. It usually takes me at least two hours to crank out an average sized update. About half of that is writing and half is time spent referring back to notes and that sort of thing. I find that if I don't think I'll have at least two hours to write that I won't do it at all.

So I'm going to try something different for a while. I'm going to write in smaller bits whenever I find the time and just post whatever I produce from that, even if it is only 2-3 paragraphs. This will mean that I'll have a lot more updates but that the story will be more chopped up into little bite-sized chunks. Expect to see the first "story bites" later today or this evening and let me know what you think of this style.
 


Watching with interest...

Rel said:
I've decided that I'm getting too hung up on the idea that I've got to set aside a sizable chunk of time to write out my updates in discreet blocks. It usually takes me at least two hours to crank out an average sized update. About half of that is writing and half is time spent referring back to notes and that sort of thing. I find that if I don't think I'll have at least two hours to write that I won't do it at all.

So I'm going to try something different for a while. I'm going to write in smaller bits whenever I find the time and just post whatever I produce from that, even if it is only 2-3 paragraphs. This will mean that I'll have a lot more updates but that the story will be more chopped up into little bite-sized chunks. Expect to see the first "story bites" later today or this evening and let me know what you think of this style.

Rel,

I have been thinking about trying the same thing...more frequent, but shorter updates. It will be interesting to see how it goes.

~ Old One
 

Here's the first "story nugget". Hopefully this will be a good ongoing solution to my chronic lack of time. ;)

Enwebbed

Nobody was comfortable with the constant darkness. The sameness of the tunnel and the monotony of the travel were almost hypnotizing and the group frequently found that they were snapping almost as if from a trance. Nobody could tell how much time was passing except for the occasional moments when they realized that one of their protective spells had expired.

An indeterminate time, measured only by the fact that they had rested twice, after they left Do-kun Ghul, the sameness was broken by the tiniest of details. Some 8-10 feet off the floor, at almost the mid point of the side of the tunnel, were a cluster of holes nearly a foot across. Further examination by Speaks determined them likely to have been bored by Thoqqua, or “Fire Worms” as they were sometimes called. He warned the rest of the group to be careful of them as the white-hot tips of their heads could be deadly dangerous of one was not prepared. Lazarius warded himself against fire before they proceeded on.

They had progressed only a couple minutes further up the tunnel when they heard a noise. Their eyes shot to the tunnel around them as Speaks called out a warning, “They can sense our footsteps so stay still and beware!”

But they found themselves surprised when the attack came from a completely unexpected quarter. Suddenly the air was filled by dozens of small bat-like shapes.

Four of the creatures swarmed over Lazarius but his defensive Mage Armor blunted their stingers and they clung ineffectually to his thick robes. Scipio was less fortunate and three of the tiny beasts sank their proboscises into his furry hide and began to drink his blood in great gulps. Cathal, Marius and Marcus, clustered further up the passage were swarmed as well and before they could so much as swing a weapon, each found at least two of the creatures sucking the lifeblood from their veins.

Without warning, the corridor exploded in blinding light and sizzling heat as pain shot through every member of the party. Some of the blood-bloated creatures assaulting the group exploded as their bellies boiled. Others fell to the ground as their thin legs and wings turned to ash under the blistering heat of the lightning. The various members of the party staggered as their muscles spasmed involuntarily and their teeth felt as though they might explode as their jaws clenched in pain. Most cast about desperately to discover where this latest assault had originated.

They found their answer as the smoke cleared and they could see crackling wisps of static still playing across Lazarius’ fingertips.

“Stirges. I hate ‘em,“ said the War Wizard by way of reply.
 

Mwahahahah - Gotta love Lazarius' style on that.

Rel, whatever works best for you as far as storyhour goodness goes. I'll be happy to read them either way. :)
 





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