Setting Proposal: A Tail of Woe

[Upper_Krust]

Hi all!

Sorry you didn't get your submission finished Daniel...however if I was to critique it I would find myself agreeing with Vaxalon.

Though I have to admit I enjoyed reading your proposal!

You write well, but for me there were just too few ideas involved. Thinking about it I have probably went in the opposite direction - too many ideas (crammed?) with the writing suffering as a result? (but hey I am a designer first and a writer second! )

 

[Daniel Knight]

Daniel, I don't mean any disrespect, but I hope all of the submissions are like yours... if so, I'm a shoe-in for the ten-pager.

I’m glad my work makes you feel better about yours.