Shackled City Epic: "Vengeance" (story concluded)

Who is your favorite character in "The Shackled City"?

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  • Dannel

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Wow, I didn't even notice that the last update was 500 chapters. How the time flies. :)

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Chapter 501

Beorna and Umbar formed a dwarven wall before the menacing gap of the pit at their backs. The grimlocks formed a bloody wave that blasted against that wall, but each surge was driven back, leaving behind bits of itself as detritus that oozed blood and gore from huge gashes and crushed skulls.

Beorna could not reach her sword, but her dagger, infused with divine magic, was punching deep holes into grimlock bodies with each thrust. One grimlock already lay at her feet, its body pierced by several such thrusts, and in a momentary lull she defensively cast a quick spell, infusing herself with divine power. Thus fortified, she met the next attack with a jab that pierced a lung, followed immediately by a slash across the grimlock’s throat that sent it tumbling back into its fellows, bleeding out the last of its life upon the stones.

But even the templar’s storm of controlled violence faded in potency compared to what Umbar was doing beside her. The dwarf, now over ten feet tall, was knocking grimlocks around like straw dummies, his hammer pulverizing even the insanely tough bodies of these foes. Yet the grimlocks, driven by their insane fanaticism, refused to give way, launching attacks that could not penetrate the dwarf’s resistances.

The battle was rapidly turning into a slaughter, the dwarves’ attacks becoming a mechanical process of transforming living enemies into corpses. There was one momentary break in the melee, as a high-pitched noise, not quite human, sounded in the dark gap in the partially open double doors at the end of the corridor. That opening was limned in a soft red glow, giving it a diabolic aura. The dwarves looked up and saw a dark form moving in that opening, just for a moment; each felt a surge of something wash over them, a sick feeling of malevolence that their sturdy constitutions quickly shook off. They had not even paused in their attacks, each sending another grimlock to the ground with their next blow.

“What was that?” Beorna shouted over the din of violence.

“Evil!” Umbar returned, stepping forward, through the muck of corpses and still-struggling survivors. At least four grimlocks that could still stand threw themselves at him, but the cleric ignored them, pushing forward to the doors.

There was nothing there; the chamber beyond was huge, but no enemies presented themselves within. His motion had opened himself to a cunning attack, however, and a pain erupted in his leg as a grimlock cut into his hamstring with its axe. His greave held and the wound wasn’t crippling, but it forced him to turn around and punish the offender with a solid two-handed blow to the chest that sent it flying backward.

“Arun!” Beorna shouted, unable to turn because of the two grimlocks that were still pressing her, unable to see through the lingering smoke that hovered above the pit in any case. “Are you all right?”

The paladin could not immediately respond. His armor had kept him alive in that initial surge, ironically the grimlock clinging doggedly to his back helping to protect him from the axes of its fellows. A second tried to yank his helmet off, but he was ready for that trick, and he knocked it back with a solid punch to the head. He heard Hodge leap over to aid him, and could hear enough of what was going on across the far pit to know that Beorna and Umbar would be too busy to help them.

So he cast out his mind, and called for aid.

He felt the familiar presence even as the cries of the grimlocks announced the arrival of the newcomer. Clinger tore into the grimlock ranks, seizing the grimlock on the paladin’s back with its powerful jaws, and yanking the pesky foe off. Grimlocks attacked the celestial lizard, tearing into its golden hide with their axes, but the loyal creature remained by its master, shielding him until he could recover.

Arun’s vision was still hindered by the stinging tears left over from the acrid smoke, but the bright glow provided enough guidance for him to find what he was looking for. Bending down to recover the holy sword cost him, as a pair of blows clanged hard into his back, one crushing a plate and opening a bloody gash just below the lowest rib on his left side.

But he had the sword.

He straightened. Both grimlocks lifted their axes to strike again.

The paladin called upon Moradin, and unleashed a red storm of death upon them.

Six seconds later, both grimlocks lay on the ground, looking like they had been dropped into a threshing machine.

Arun turned to help his companion. Clinger had the last grimlock still fighting pinned in its jaws, but that didn’t stop it from trying to hack at the lizard with its axe. However, Arun taking its head off its shoulders did put a tone of finality on its efforts.

“Hodge!” he cried, looking around for his cohort.

“Down ‘ere!” the dwarf shouted, the words followed by hacking coughs.

Arun rushed over to the edge of the pit. The fire had mostly burned out, although some of the ruined furniture still flickered with more “normal” yellow tongues of flame. The smoke cleared enough for Arun to see Hodge standing amidst the spikes. One of the grimlocks that had knocked him down was impaled on the metal stickers, while the second lay a few feet away, a round oval in the side of its skull where Hodge had chopped through with his waraxe. The dwarf looked a mess, and he pressed his hand to his side where blood continued to ooze from a shot that had gotten through his armor.

“I could use a hand up,” he managed.

Arun nodded, instructing Clinger, before turning toward the far end of the corridor. Through the gaps in the fading wall of smoke, he saw Beorna and Umbar, the cleric still empowered by righteous might, surrounded by a veritable wall of bodies. The templar’s eyes met his, and he felt a surge of relief.

But the relief also meant that the pain, pushed aside in the rush of battle, came rushing back, and he decided that it might be a very good idea to call upon Moradin’s power for healing.
 

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500 Chapters!!!!!!!!

Lazybones said:
Chapter 500

Really!? Wow! ... That's a Whole Lotta Story Hour Goodness !
As I have enjoyed this long and twisted path all the way from the beginning (Tales) I just have to say Thank You again, for sharing your talent and imagination with us.

Blessings,
Richard
M < > <

Edit: Well, ya beat me to the punch LB, but I tried :)
 
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Hey, I didn't notice either. Belated congratulations on over 500 chapters done! :D

And the dwarves finally gain the upper hand and handily butcher the Grimlocks, at last. But we have an unexpected wave of malevonence from... where? A mystery! In my experience, your mysteries become nasty surprises and deadly plot twists. :]
 

Hey readers:

As I noted earlier, I'd left the story for a while, and since that inevitably leads to rust in the ol' writing wheels, I sat down last night and skimmed about 15 ENW-pages worth of story and comments in this thread. First, I just wanted to offer a portable hole full of gratitude for all those who have posted to this thread with praise, comments, or suggestions. Even the constructive criticism. :p You guys have really kept the tale going all these years, and I think we have built one of the longest threads, if not on the whole site, at least on the SH forum!

I am going to be at a Commission meeting for the rest of the week, but I plowed through my block yesterday and today and spawned a few new twists for the story. When I'm in "writing mode" I have to carry a small notebook with me, because ideas just start exploding out of my mind at all times (especially at boring staff meetings at work). Hopefully I can carry the momentum forward.

Oh, and in response to a query I got from a reader... I'm not currently planning on writing a SH set in the Age of Worms Adventure Path. I have the first module in the series, but I let my subscription to Dungeon lapse and I don't think I'm going to renew it at this juncture. (I have enough modules for about 20 years of tabletop play in my collection now!) I don't know how long the epic Heroes/Travelers story will continue, but I can guesstimate from where I am now that we've got at least another two months of every-weekday posts to go. After that, I was thinking of getting back into fiction set in my own worlds (but still in the fantasy genre). I wrote Travels and The Shackled City knowing they would never see publication outside of ENWorld, and it's been a ton of fun doing it. But sometimes writing a specifically D&D story, and one set in particular in a WotC setting, has been limiting. Especially at the higher levels, where I spend almost as much time browsing the SRD and editing stat blocks as I do writing the story.

This doesn't necessarily mean an end to my ENW posting days. In the past I talked with some readers about serializing some of my older works, novels that I wrote in graduate school. It would be a good exercise for me to post those, get back in and give them a good editing and maybe some rewrites as I go. While not specifically D&D-baesd in the sense that these stories are, they are fantasy in much the same vein (the setting started as a 1st/2nd ed module that I created as an undergraduate, and still bears the footprints of D&D), so I think they would fall within the rubric of the Story Hour Forum. If people are interested, I may go in that direction.

I also have an abstract (just 2 pages at the moment) for a story set in a generic world, focused around a few character concepts. Rather than delve into an epic story a la Jordan or Martin, this would focus more on characters and their interactions, and would be purely for fun (I write to escape the monotony of work, after all). Haven't decided whether to develop this further. I also have an unfinished novel (#7) that I may get back to someday. :D

I guess this is a long-handed way of saying that I'm going to keep writing. But I guess that not going to surprise anyone who's waded through 1.1 million words of Travels and Shackled City. :lol:

Oh, and I do plan on compiling the complete Shackled City into Microsoft Reader and PDF formats for fans of the series, once the entire saga is done.

Heh, with all that I almost forgot today's update:

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Chapter 502

The battle in the corridor appeared to have broken the strength of the grimlock tribe, for they encountered no further resistance as they continued their exploration of the Malachite Fortress. Once again clerical magic restored them to health, although this time they also had to rely upon a few potions to supplement the abilities commanded by Umbar, Beorna, and Arun. The four of them had absorbed enough damage to lay low a battalion of common soldiers, and Arun hoped that their enemy did not have some further surprise waiting for them deeper in the complex.

The pit levers, when raised, lifted the trapdoors back into position, settling with an audible click. “Dwavish work,” Umbar noted, with an approving nod. This allowed them to reunite and press on, into the great hall at the end of the passage.

The place was barren, nearly empty, although it bore enough similarities to Kazmojen’s bazaar to stir dark memories in Arun. There were four iron braziers set up around the raised dais on the southern end of the chamber, their dying coals still shedding a faint red light.

To the west, a heavy stone door opened only after considerable effort to reveal a gaping chasm. The bridge that Arun remembered from their last visit was gone, destroyed in the recent quakes, leaving only a narrow ledge that ended in crumbling stone.

So they turned to the other exit, in the east wall. That door opened to reveal a long chamber, once a dining hall, now showing the same signs of deliberate destruction they’d encountered elsewhere in the fortress. The remains of several large tables were scattered across the floor, and garish things had been sketched on the walls in what looked like dried blood. Five doors, three to the left, and two to the right, offered a wealth of choices. The four dwarves spread out to quickly check the room for any signs of their quarry.

“Hey, this one’s been wedged shut,” Hodge said, drawing them to a door in the far corner of the room. The iron spikes were quickly removed by Umbar’s hammer, and they forced the door open to reveal a twenty foot square room beyond. Huddled in the back of the room were four young human men.

“Who… who are you?” one of them ventured. They were in poor condition, their garments torn and hanging in remnants from their pale bodies, shivering together against the cold. Several bore marks of struggle.

“Friends,” Arun said, coming forward.

“Be careful!” one of them said. “Those… things, they infected us with some sort of disease. We didn’t want to drink, but they made us… they turned Orran to stone!”

The dwarves shared a look, but Arun did not hesitate, assisting the men, treating their wounds with trickles of positive energy. Calling upon his power, he purged them of the taint of the Vanishing, and each relaxed as the healing surge passed through them.

“You’re… you’re Arun, the paladin, aren’t you?” one of them asked.

Arun nodded. “Tell us what you can about the grimlocks.”

The one who had initially spoken shuddered. “They came up on us by surprise, up in the city. Gratham tried to fight back, he actually hit one with his dagger, but the thing just punched him… damn near killed him! The rest of us couldn’t do much, I’m afraid… those things are strong.”

“Aye, that we know,” Hodge said.

“Are they all…” another youth began.

“We killed a good lot o’ them,” Hodge replied. “If there be more, then they be smart to run off.”

“Tell us more about what happened to Orran,” Arun prodded.

“Their leader,” the first youth said. “Gratham was out cold, but the rest of us saw it,” he said, as if doubting that the dwarves would believe him. “She was… well, we thought she was a woman, but she said such terrible things, told us we were the first, that others would follow.”

“She called it the Fade,” another of the men added. “She made us drink from the gray cask. Orran wouldn’t do it, he knocked the cup away. That made her mad… they turned us away, and when we turned back, Orran was a statue! They took him away somewhere, I didn’t see where.”

“Petrification,” Umbar said. “Sounds like a medusa. Common leader for grimlocks, works out since the blind stalkers can’t see.”

“Tell me more about this gray cask,” Arun said.

“She said some kinda magic word, and water came out,” one of the men said.

“And she had a rock flyin’ around her head,” another added.

“Magic items,” Beorna said. “And you said that the Vanishing was transmitted through cursed magic items…”

Arun looked at them. Something clicked as the pieces came together for all of them.

“They intended to infect the entire city with the plague,” Umbar said.

“We’ve got to get above, quickly,” Arun said, picking up one of the young men. Despite the healing, they were still weak from their ordeal.

“Perhaps we should leave them here, for now,” Umbar suggested. By the looks on the young humans’ faces, the prospect did not hold appeal for them.

“No one stays behind,” Arun said. “Come, let’s get back to the lift.”

The dwarves all but carried the weakened humans as they retraced their steps through the underground citadel. They were wary of another ambush, but nothing emerged from the darkness to hinder them. Within a few minutes they had made their way back to the shaft leading up to Jzadirune, where they made a not entirely unexpected discovery.

“Someone’s taken the lift up,” Beorna said. She looked up into the shaft, but there was only darkness for as far she could see up into it.

Arun pulled the triggering lever that would bring the lift back down. There was a grinding noise from up above, and then a loud clatter that grew rapidly louder.

“Get back! Out!” he shouted, putting his own words into action as he retreated into the outer passage, Beorna only a step behind. Umbar and Hodge were already clear, along with the humans.

Only a heartbeat after Beorna had burst out through the open doorway, a loud crash announced the arrival of the lift, falling from its upper station at Jzadirune. Shards of shattered wood and a plume of dust poured out over them as the heavy mechanism settled upon the floor of the shaft, although none of them were harmed.

Hodge came forward and looked at the wreckage. “Well, now what?” he asked.
 

Hey Lazybones,

it's great news that you the writing bug isn't leaving you & that ENWorld will see more of your stories! Although, the Travellers would be good for more story, still. Just think of the fact that only one prophecy has come true so far... ;)

And thanks for these "interludes". They rock!
 

I'm sure I could keep writing stuff for the Travelers, but in all honesty, the epic levels just don't do it for me. I don't know how tabletop players can run epics without having a CPA handy just to manage all the stats and paperwork.

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Chapter 503

“We must find another way to get back up to the city,” Arun said.

“Your companion,” Beorna said. “Clinger can take you up, and then come back for us.”

Arun frowned. “I will try, but the walls of the shaft are almost sheer; there are limits even to what he can do.”

“I can assist here,” Umbar said. He lifted his arms, spreading wide his shield and hammer, his eyes closing as he intoned the rough syllables of a dwarvish prayer. The chant went on for several seconds before a rumbling in the ground startled them, and they retreated from the spot where Umbar stood. A moment later, a rough humanoid form, a good eight feet in height, rose up out of the ground before the priest. The earth elemental bowed to the cleric, who addressed it in the Terran tongue.

“The elemental will bear you up the shaft,” Umbar said to Arun.

“It won’t be able to carry more than one of us at a time…”

“It will only remain long enough to take you; bring a rope to toss down to us below, and we will follow.”

“But...”

“There is no time, warrior! The medusa must be stopped. Go! We will follow behind as swiftly as we can.”

Arun nodded, accepting the rope from Hodge and stepping forward toward the elemental. The creature did not hesitate, taking up the paladin and treading ponderously into the shaft, ducking to pass through the low threshold of the entry. The elemental immediately started up the shaft, its legs sinking into the stone as though they were soft sand, using its bond with the earth to carry it upward, its upper body holding Arun clear as it ascended.

The ascent seemed to take an eternity, although consciously Arun knew it was only a little over a minute. The elemental deposited him in the doorway at the top end of the shaft, and then vanished back into the surrounding stone.

Arun wasted no time tying off the end of the coil of rope to the nearby doorjam before unwrapping it and tossing it back into the shaft. It had been a thick coil, well over a hundred feet—but was it enough to reach the bottom of the shaft? If only he’d had the foresight to bring the flying carpet, despite its bulk… but no, it remained in secure storage in the Temple of Helm above.

The paladin shook his head. He was wasting time, and there was no time to delay. He already had a good idea of where the medusa was going; rising, he drew his sword, its brilliant glow banishing all shadows and doubts.

Making haste, he started back toward the shaft that led back to the surface.
 

Chapter 504

The storm had intensified somewhat, the icy rain off the Alamirs now falling in a continuous stream that ran down the streets of the city, draining steadily down the sides of the caldera before ultimately trailing off through the city’s drains into the river chasm in the center.

Down by the lowest tier of the city, Lava Avenue was awash in puddles of water that in some places were up to a foot deep. This lowest tier of the city had suffered particular damage in the disaster that had reshaped Cauldron, and with the draining of the lake a number of buildings, now perched precariously over the river chasm, had been condemned as unsafe. At places, the remnants of once-busy docks trailed out over the darkness, over fast-moving waters below that were starting a tumultuous descent down the side of the mountain. The street was still navigable, but the quakes had caused damage here as well, and street repair was being postponed until the structures that could support citizens of the town were restored to a safe condition. The streets were all but deserted, even the Watch not in evidence on this particularly unpleasant night.

But even if there had been more of the town’s inhabitants out in the predawn hours, it was unlikely that they would have seen the dark figures that made their way stealthily through the town. The first was a slender, nimble figure, the robe that flapped around her form like a flap of discarded gray fabric dancing in the wind. The pale flesh protruding from the sleeves and hem was almost completely invisible in the near-darkness. The second, following close behind, was more bulky and ponderous, but likewise its neutral gray skin was nearly translucent, a shade in the night. This one was hunched over, its arms wrapped around a cumbersome burden that it clutched close against its body.

To the Chosen, even the darkness of the city in the depths of the stormy night seemed bright to eyes that had known only the dark reaches of the Underdark. The rain and wind were bewildering in their intensity, the great open space above the caldera strange and terrifying to one who had always known the tight confines of a cavern roof above. But she was driven by a fanaticism that allowed her to push all of those fearful distractions to the back of her mind. She knew her destination from the careful descriptions provided by her scouts, and even though the last of her grimlocks were likely already destroyed by the invaders into the Cairn of the Fade, she at least would prove worthy of the ordeal placed before her by the powers of her universe.

It rose up out of the night, ahead, a massive rectangular shape. The massive cistern lay on the chasm side of Lava Avenue, upon a broad shelf of jutting stone that had once supported a pleasant park, Before. The landscape was still reassuringly green during sunny days, but now, in the depths of the night, the trees formed dark shadows with bare branches that resembled grasping claws. The Chosen saw these and shuddered, consumed with apocalyptic visions of death and destruction.

The collapse of the volcano’s rim and the loss of the lake had presented a problem for Cauldron; the city’s water supply was dependent upon that resource, and many of the city’s wells had gone dry once the water had found a way to exit its former confines and pour down the volcano toward the lowlands and the yet more distant sea. The cistern was the first step in providing the city with a new water supply, a stopgap until new wells, pumps, and pipes could be put into place. It had been created in just a few days, both through combined labor and the intervention of Beorna of Helm, who’d cast a dozen stone shape spells over several days to form the stone gathered from the wreckage of the city into a rectangular container fifty feet long, twenty feet across, and up to eight feet deep. The cistern was filled by a simple pumping system that used collapsible leather buckets attached to a winch and pulley assembly, drawing up river water from its rapid course to an open pipe that fed the container. That assembly had been safely stored now, and with the rains continuing to fill the already awash cistern it was unlikely it would have to be used anytime soon.

The cistern had been partly built into the ground, so that its lip was only about five feet above the level of the surrounding street. A simple wooden platform had been set up to abut it, and a spillway installed on one of the narrow sides, so that water could be drawn from it easily into barrels or other large containers. The Chosen and her companion made their way up to the platform. Water trickled out over the edges as rain continued to fall into it, the droplets splattering across the flat plane like tiny spiders crawling over a stone floor. The cistern held sixty thousand gallons of water; enough to meet the needs of three thousand people on an average day, slightly more than the current population of the town.

“And so we fulfill our destiny,” the Chosen said, clicking her tongue to signal to her companion. The scarred grimlock acolyte came forward carrying his heavy burden. The gnomish variant on the decanter of endless water itself could have solved Cauldron’s water issues, had it not been infected with the corruptive influence of the Vanishing. As it was, it was the perfect vessel for the completion of the Chosen’s twisted plans.

The grimlock strained with the weight of his burden as he lifted it up to the lip of the cistern. The little keg itself wasn’t very heavy, but several large paving stones had been attached to it with thin but durable elastic lines. At the bottom of the cistern, it would appear to just be a large rock to anyone not actually within the huge container.

A clanking noise that sounded distinctly over the noise of the storm drew the attention of the medusa around. She turned to see the dwarf paladin standing in the street, the rain sloughing off of his metal skin.

“Yield, or die,” he said, his hand tightening on the hilt of his sword.
 

Whoops! The infamous Friday Cliffhanger lives up to it's reputation once more. :p

And it seems that either Aurn is about to get the beating of his life, or one demented 'Chosen' is about to get what is comming to her. :] One way or another, it will is an excellent opportunity to once again listen to the screams of agony ring in Cauldron. :]
 


Neverwinter Knight said:
They never yield, do they? ;)
Now why would we encourage them to take the easy path? It would mean less suffering and screaming for all involved. Don't encourage Lazy to bow to such foolish sentiments... we need the pain! :]
 

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