Shackled City Epic: "Vengeance" (story concluded)

Who is your favorite character in "The Shackled City"?

  • Zenna

    Votes: 27 29.7%
  • Mole

    Votes: 17 18.7%
  • Arun

    Votes: 31 34.1%
  • Dannel

    Votes: 10 11.0%
  • Other (note in a post)

    Votes: 6 6.6%

wolff96 said:
A crit from Dannel? Or just the culmination of the creature's wounds?

Just curious.

Great writing in this update -- I love the fight with the dragon. Though I *am* shocked... a Friday without a cliffhanger? Are you feeling okay? Not coming down sick, I hope... ;)
Yeah, that was a crit; all those little hits weren't enough to really threaten the dragon's life (even with the smite added in), and rather than have the dragon fly off and come at them again later, I just though I'd end it. Dannel does manage some nice crits with the x3 modifier, even though his "mighty" bow isn't really all that impressive. They needed a break at that point anyway ;)

It seems like the plotline might come around eventually to the dragon's mother, later in the campaign when the high-level mods in the series come out.
 

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Thanks for writing this - I'm enjoying reading it.

I'm also putting out a shameless call for help. I'm planning on running the new adventure path series this summer. If any of you can chime in with some advice, please see the thread referenced in my signature.
 

d12, I made a few comments in your thread, based on what I've learned "running" this series. The AP is a tough series, but for a writer who loves to torment his characters, it's a great source.

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Chapter 100

Zenna sat on the ground in a miserable heap, wrapped in the scorched remnants of her cloak, rocking back and forth slightly, though the wind had died as though the dragon’s passing had stolen it away.

“Zenna,” Dannel said softly, coming over to where she sat on the cold earth, a good distance from the others.

“Leave me alone,” she said, turning away, betraying the source of her misery as she tried to tug up her cowl to conceal her features. The battered threads had taken too much abuse, however, and the hood came off in her hand, the last few strands tearing away as she tugged on them. Disconsolate, she tossed the fabric away.

“Zenna,” the elf said, a bit more firmly. “You have to get up. The others need you.”

She looked up at him, her eyes wet with the tears that she only held back through concerted effort. No, I cannot show weakness, not to him...

“I need you.”

His words broke through her resolution, and she let out a sob as the tears released down her cheeks. But after a moment, she restored control, and as her face darkened. “Don’t mock me... I don’t have a mirror handy, but I can imagine how I look right now.” Magical healing had restored her body, but it couldn’t replace the hair that had been burned away from half of her head, nor could it make the regrown skin look natural, the pinkish patches of fresh growth forming splotches where they intersected with paler, unblemished skin, where an accidental placement of an article of clothing had provided protection.

She met his gaze with a cold look. “Get used to it, the hat’s gone, so you’ll have to face the real me from here on.” Unable to maintain the challenge in her stare, she abruptly looked away.

He came forward, knelt in front of her. She tried to shy away, but he grabbed her by the arms, a little too roughly, perhaps, forcing her to look at him. What she saw in his eyes, though, when she could finally meet them, wasn’t anger, but warmth.

“It was always the real you,” he told her. “The person that I care about, Zenna.”

He reached up, and she didn’t shy away as he gently touched the side of her face. Then he pulled her forward—or she fell forward, it wasn’t quite clear—and they held each other close.

Not far distant, amidst a patch of soil churned up by the claws of the dragon, Arun helped Hodge to his feet. The dwarf looked a sight worse than Zenna, although it was difficult to discern what was the result of the dragon’s assault and what was part of his normally disheveled appearance. Arun offered him a second vial of healing elixir—he’d had to pour the first down the unconscious dwarf’s throat, as he’d spent all of his divinely granted healing energy restoring Zenna to consciousness earlier. It was his last healing potion, but he offered it freely, despite the numerous wounds he himself had suffered.

Hodge could see how battered the paladin was, however, and shook his head. “I’ve got a healin’ draught or two left me,” he said. “You should tend to yer friends, or to yerself.”

Arun nodded, and downed the contents of the vial without further comment. The two dwarves just stood there, silent. Hodge looked around him at the far edge of the plain around the edges of the boulder field, as if confirming what he’d seen earlier. The body of the dragon was a low mound, and from a distance might have been a hummock of turf and rocks, or something equally innocuous. Only he knew better. They all knew better.

“Sure it dead, eh?” the dwarf finally ventured.

“Mole’s checking it out,” Arun said, “But the way it fell...” Hodge’s eyes widened slightly at that, but Arun’s faith in his diminutive companion was clear in his voice, and the shield dwarf found yet another preconception disintegrating in his mind.

“Yeh...” he said. “Look...”

“There is no need to explain yourself,” the paladin said. “You could not have known the danger of accompanying us, for we ourselves did not know what to expect. Facing a dragon’s not exactly a common undertaking.”

“Yeh, well, you ‘andled ‘er right enough,” Hodge said. “Damnedest thing I’ve ever seen...” he once again trailed off, as though searching for words that he couldn’t quite find.

“Well, I guess we’d better talk to that madman,” Arun said. They looked at where Crazy Jared was standing alone near the base of the boulder mound, mumbling something to himself. “Normally I’d leave that to the elf, but it looks like he’s got his hands full right about now.”

He turned, but Hodge forestalled him. “Wait. Can... can I ask yer somepin?”

“Ask.”

“All that stuff yer were sayin’ earlier... when I was talkin’ ‘bout treasure, and yer was goin’ on ‘bout honor and the gods and helpin’ that dwarf hero find ‘is son and all that stuff... yer really believe all that... I guess what I’m sayin’...” He shrugged. “I don’t rightly know what I’m sayin’. Just when I saw you rush that dragon... I ain’t never seen the likes o’ that, nowayhow.”

Arun nodded, and for the first time the hard look toward the other dwarf softened. “I don’t pretend to have all the answers, friend. I can only say what I believe, and the Code that gives me... gives me meaning to my life. It didn’t always, and there was a time when I doubted...” He turned, his gaze lingering on Dannel and Zenna. “But I found some friends who helped me find my way back to the path of truth... my truth, perhaps, but a good one, I think.”

Hodge nodded, and there was nothing mocking in his eyes this time as he regarded the paladin solemnly. “Well then, I be guessin’ we shouldn’t keep the wacko waitin’ then, eh?”

Mole approached the fallen carcass of the dragon, savoring the feelings that swirled in her as she neared the great beast. A dragon. A real live—well, not anymore—dragon! In all her dreams of adventure, she’d never imagined that she’d meet up with one of the fantastic beasts of legend and bard’s tale. Her uncle, of course, had battled several in his career, and she’d always relished those accounts, stories of drama and hang-onto-your-seat thrill that he’d told in that cutting style of his. She’d read his book, too, even before she was old enough to read, her little fingers tracing over the sketches of her uncle and his friends, of wondrous places and terrible creatures, crafted from recollections of long years spent on the roads of Faerûn’s Wild West.

She swelled with pride as she noticed one of her bolts jutting from between two scales on the creature’s hindquarters. She’d gotten a few hits in, she thought, though it was really Dannel’s bow and Arun’s hammer that had brought the mighty beast down. Well, she’d gotten through the battle without a scratch, and that was something...

She checked the dragon—a bit more perfunctorily than she’d have liked, but her friends were waiting—and returned toward the shelter of the boulder field. She wiped her hands on her breeches; she’d taken a few mementoes from the carcass to tuck into her magical backpack, and dragonblood was sticky. Her magical boots carried her across the plateau in great strides, but as she passed the flame-blackened area where the dragon had initially attacked, she paused. She bent over and uncovered a small object almost indistinguishable from the blackened scrub.

Ah. Zenna’s hat. It was a little charred, but she hefted it experimentally, and nodded to herself. It still felt magical, but Mole had to admit that her inexpert evaluation wasn’t necessarily as accurate as Zenna’s detect magic spell.

She tucked the hat into her pocket, and rushed back to rejoin her companions.
 

Good stuff, LB. I've said it before, but I think your drama/comedy/storytelling writing may be even better than your action writing. It'll be interesting to see if Mole gives the hat back to Zenna and, if so, she decides to continue using it.

PS: nothing like a deranged illusionist to spice up a campaign! :D
 

Chapter 101

The five travelers formed a half-circle behind Jared as the madman led them back to the charred remains of his dwelling.

Zenna looked to be collected and in control once again—her features now restored to their normal appearance, thanks to Mole’s return of her magical hat to her—but there was still a stiffness to her motion and demeanor that revealed the strain that yet suffused her. Dannel walked near her, his own concern written clearly in his dark amber eyes.

Jared seemed nonplussed by the destruction of his modest living quarters. Indeed, as he walked, he exclaimed, “A good bit of damage done by that rampaging beast, but do not despair—we shall rebuild, better than before!”

“If yer thinkin’ I’ll be laborin’ here to build a new house fer a crazy, yer dafter ‘an I thought,” Hodge grumbled, but his voice wasn’t loud enough to carry to where the “king” strode at their van.

“Um... your majesty...” Dannel began.

“Behold, the peaceful land of Anduria!” Jared said with a flourish, lifting his arms wide as he turned once again to face him. As he did so, his thin fingers twisted a pattern in the air, and the liquid syllables of magic poured from his lips.

Zenna tensed for a moment as she recognized the sounds and gestures as spellcasting, but then forced herself to relax. This man, though clearly mentally sick, had not offered them any threat, and in fact had managed to aid them somewhat against the dragon. “Another illusion,” she muttered, more to herself than to her friends, although Mole heard her.

Even as she spoke the landscape was transformed. Where the sparse and rocky plateau had stretched was now an expansive landscape of vibrant growth and bright color. The thorny and scraggly brush of before was replaced by flowering bushes and squat trees laden with fruit of a dozen varieties. The illusion was so complete that even the smells of the flowers could be detected by the companions, although the overall effect was ruined somewhat by the resumption of the previous landscape at the edges of the plateau, outside the limits of the spell.

Jared, however, seemed oblivious to such distinctions, or even to the fact that his own magic had conjured the illusion. “Tis it not a beauteous place?” he said wistfully.

“Indeed, sire,” Dannel said, coming forward before any of the others could offer commentary. “No other place rivals it in reputation. And so we have come, not only to look upon such marvels, but to protect it from the dangers that threaten it.”

“Smooth,” Arun commented.

“Yes, and you fought bravely,” Jared said. “And we shall not forget your bold defense of our royal person, ser knight—a great estate in the western marches of the realm shall surely be yours, for the service done to your liege this day!”

“Oh, I want one too!” Mole said, coming forward.

“Your Grace is... generous,” Dannel replied, with a deep bow. “But first we must confront the danger that yet lingers. The dragon,” he said, indicating the fallen creature, in case the madman hadn’t clearly marked its nature, “is but the leading force of an invading force, bent on conquering this land!”

“I knew it!” Jared exclaimed. “The treacherous demon-queen of Kheltos plans anew to overthrow Anduria! Long have I suspected that she survived our last confrontation, and still seeks to destroy our fair land! I must raise the army, to defend the borders!”

“Um... sire,” Dannel interrupted, “My... knights... and I are prepared to go and do battle against this foe, but require some direction. The enemy is cunning, and this time are coming up from an access point to the Underdark, which is located near here...”

Jared nodded. “The Pit of the Seven Jaws. Of course, I should have guessed.”

“Seven jaws?” Mole said. “I don’t think I like the sound of that...”

“A guardian of some sort?” Zenna ventured.

“Have your squire fetch pen and ink, and I will prepare a map, to guide you, noble knight,” Jared said. “I am certain with your prowess, any defenses possessed by the foe shall be breached!”

“I don’t doubt it, sire,” Dannel said. Zenna procured a sheet of parchment, an old pen, and a vial of ink from her bag, and handed them to the madman, who quickly bent over a rock and started making quick sketches on the parchment. In a matter of minutes, he’d prepared a drawing, which he handed to Dannel. The elf examined the map—it appeared fairly clear, actually, although most of the landmarks were keyed with names that were presumably sites within “Anduria.”

“We’d best get a good start then,” Dannel said, rolling up the map for safe storage in his pouch, then taking up his bow. “Will you be... all right, here, sire?”

The old man nodded. “Fear not for me, sir knight! I have considerable forces left to me... if Kheltos thinks to catch Anduria unaware, she shall be quite surprised when she strikes!”

“He’ll be well enough, elf,” Arun said, as the adventurers turned away. “He’s been up here quite some time, looks like, and for all the apparent difficulties he has with reality, his magic is clearly potent.”

“Powerful indeed,” Zenna remarked, casting a last look back at the old man, who regarded them with a beaming look full of confidence.

Mole had lingered behind a moment, and as the others started away, she leaned in and said, conspiratorially, “Are you really crazy?”

The old man knelt so that their faces were on the same level. Matching her tone, he said, “What a bold question to ask of your sovereign! But you’re not the first to make such an assertion—I suspect there was a bit of over-familiarity earlier in my family tree, if you get my meaning—so I will answer. Are not all of us who walk the byways of this wondrous world at least a bit crazy? I say I am crazier than some, and saner than the demon queen of Kheltos, may she ever be stymied in her foul plots!”

With a wink, he rose. Mole smiled, and with a quick bow, she hurried to rejoin the others.

“Well?” Zenna asked, when the gnome had rejoined them. “What’s the verdict?”

“Undecided,” Mole said, glancing back at the solitary man standing on the bluff, the wind tugging at his clothes, now again ragged and threadbare.

* * * * *

They pressed on for the remainder of that day, putting a number of miles between them and their battle with the dragon, and after an uneventful night camped in a sheltered hollow they continued on their trek. For once the weather seemed to favor them, although the icy wind continued to blow down out of the peaks to their right. Dannel had little difficulty following the landmarks sketched on their map, and held them true to their course as they made their way steadily northward. They had only one encounter, with a trio of bugbear hunters heading down out of the mountains to the lowlands, moving perpendicular to the adventurers’ line of march. The hulking goblinoids spotted the travelers from Cauldron but were not eager for a confrontation, and the two groups gave each other a wide berth before continuing on their way. Since the bugbears didn’t seem to be heading in the direction of Jared’s hut or any other known settlements, the companions let them be. The two dwarves weren’t especially happy about that, for different reasons; Arun expressed concern that the bugbears might be part of a larger company intent on trouble in the region, while Hodge suggested that the three would circle around to follow them, and slit their throats when they paused to camp for the night.

“There’s no need to seek out trouble, when enough of it finds us as it is,” Dannel said, as they made their way back along the trail. Holding up the map to catch the light of the cloud-obscured sun, he added, “And I think that we’ll reach our destination before nightfall, in any case. Even if there are more of them, they’d be foolish to follow us into the Underdark.”

“Aye, an’ what does that say about us then?” Hodge grumbled, but he did not offer further dissent as they continued their trek.

True to the elf’s words, the faint light of the fading sun still hung tenuously over the mountains when they found themselves clambering up another ridge to another broad shelf that jutted out from the range like a server holding a tray. Dannel identified this as the final marker on his map, and strung his bow, the others copying his action as they prepared their own weapons. This plateau slanted down toward its far end, and in that direction, they quickly encountered a gaping square pit that sank down into darkness where the weak light of the closing day did not penetrate.

Warily, they closed to the crumbling edges of the pit. A rank odor from below assailed their nostrils, and they could see that a narrow metal staircase had been anchored into the sides of the pit, descending around its perimeter into the darkness below.

“That’s a stink I remember,” Arun said. “Strange, I once thought that the surface had an ill odor, when first I came up from the deeper realms of the Rift.”

“Time plays odd tricks with memory,” Zenna said, stepping forward near the edge so that she could look down into the pit.

“Careful,” Dannel cautioned. “That edge looks non too sturdy.”

Zenna shot him a glance that had a slight edge, but she was clearly watching her steps as she cast one more look below and then drew back. “It looks to be about sixty feet down,” she said. The stair runs around the perimeter, and there appears to be landings at each corner. I can’t be sure, but I think there’s an opening of some sort at the bottom, a deep crevice in the stone.”

“What about the seven jaws?” Mole asked.

“We’ll find out, I suppose,” Arun said. “I’ll take the lead, but keep your distance and ware your steps. I mislike the looks of that stair.”

“Stay close to me,” Dannel told Zenna and Mole. “If we should fall, I have a spell that can slow our descent, that requires only a split second to call into being.”

Arun started down, his heavy boots clinking softly on the metal surface of the stairs. Hodge and Dannel exchanged a look, and then, with a fair amount of grumbling, the dwarf started down next. The others followed after a few moments, remaining close to the edge of the pit. All held their bows at the ready, save for Arun, whose heavy warhammer balanced prepared in his muscled fist, ready to unleash fury at the slightest hint of danger. The metal stairs creaked slightly under their weight, but held.

In the darkness of the crevice below, something stirred.
 

Chapter 102

Metal creaked, the wind blew across the lip of the pit, and tension floated heavily in the air as the companions made their way down into the shadowy darkness. Arun reached the first corner landing and started down the second flight of stairs, the others following slowly behind.

A sound alerted them, movement in the darkness within the fissure, deep enough to be out of the line of sight even of those with darkvision. Something heavy, scraping on stone. Then a sibilant hiss, a sound that filled the pit like a sinister caress.

The companions readied their weapons.

Something moved into view, crossing the boundary between total blackness and mere shadows. A long, reptilian head, shaped like a dagger, jaws filled with sharp teeth, the whole perched atop a long, twisting neck, like a snake.

“Another drake!” Hodge warned, backing up against the false security of the pit wall, lifting his crossbow.

But Dannel, who had realized the true significance of the title of this place, given to them by Jared, recognized with horror the true nature of the foe. “Back!” he warned them. “Back up, get up!”

The elf’s discovery was understood by all of them a heartbeat later, as the creature came forward into view. Another head appeared, and then another, until a twisting nest of long necks and deadly heads had appeared. The heads—seven of them, in all—were attached to a fat, powerful body, propelled forward by short, muscular legs. It was long, with much of its bulk still trailing back into the fissure. The beast was a dark gray tinged with purple, with streaks of starker violet trailing up its necks and marking the bony forehead of each head.

“Hydra!” Dannel shouted, putting a name to the beast.

“Well, don’t just stand there, put a hurt on it!” Arun yelled, starting down the stairs toward the creature.

“No!” Dannel shouted, but the warning came too late. Even as the companions launched their missiles at the creature, a volley of bolts stabbing down from the bows of Mole, Zenna, and Hodge, the hydra’s heads came up toward the descending dwarf. Arun was still too high up for its jaws to reach him, surely, but then, as the others watched in horror, several reptilian maws opened wide, and gouts of white ice blasted from the depths of the creature’s belly into the dwarf. The paladin, caught in the multiple blasts, staggered backward against the wall, his armor and shield now tinged white where ice had condensed on the metal surfaces.

“Arun!” Mole cried.

Dannel fired his bow, knowing even as he did that the shot was wasted. Indeed, even as his arrow slammed into the hydra’s body, one of the earlier wounds—from the massive size of the bolt jutting from the wound, from Hodge’s bow—healed, the thick shaft pushed harmlessly free as the tear closed itself.

“It’s regenerating!” Zenna said, recognizing what Dannel had already known would happen.

“Back up, now!” Dannel said. “The creature’s too big for those stairs, it won’t be able to follow us up!”

“I’ll get Arun!” Mole said, already darting nimbly down the steps toward the first landing.

But Hodge was already moving. Frozen by fear by the creature’s appearance, and chilled by the backblast of its frosty breath against Arun, he’d nonetheless scored a hit in the initial volley. Even before Dannel’s words his legs were already starting him on their course back up the stairs, but he hesitated, turned back to where the hydra was continuing toward Arun, most of its body now out of the fissure. Gods... it was huge, larger even than the dragon they’d battled before. As he watched the hydra unleashed another frost blast from another head, chilling the already frozen paladin further. Arun was still conscious, trying to shake free from the ice coating his compact frame, still trying to reach the creature to attack. The heads were almost just below him, now, and if he charged to the next landing, they would be able to meet him.

And tear him to pieces.

Hodge was surprised to find himself charging down, toward Arun. Frost exploded around him, and for a moment of stark terror he found himself blind, stumbling down a stair where one false step would lead to a quick and messy death. But then he was beside Arun, and he grabbed the paladin on the arm.

“We’ve got to get back up!” he shouted.

Through his pain and rage, the paladin nodded. With relief Hodge started trudging back up the steps, Arun close behind. Another frost blast followed them, but they’d reached the first landing by this point, and most of the cold was blocked by the metal framework of the staircase. The hydra’s heads hissed at them as they withdrew, snapping as a few more crossbow bolts from the other companions above harassed the creature. Finally, frustrated at the escape of its supper, the creature turned and with surprising adroitness returned to the shelter of the fissure. Within ten seconds, it was out of sight, and quiet returned to the pit.

Arun and Hodge reached the top, where the others waited. Both dwarves found the nearest open spot and dropped to the ground, breathing heavily, Arun shivering from the cold blasts that had chilled him to the bone.

“You’re frozen nigh to death,” Zenna said, her role as healer taking over as she knelt beside the ailing paladin. She took the healing wand she’d recovered from Triel Eldurast, and used it to treat the dwarf, restoring color to his pale skin and sending soothing warmth through his body.

“There’s not much power left in this,” Zenna said, holding up the wand for a moment before tucking it back into its pocket. Dannel, meanwhile, had used his own wand of cure light wounds to attend to Hodge, although the second dwarf had not suffered to the same degree as Arun.

“Not all foes can be bashed head-on,” the elf said chidingly, as Arun, much recovered, pulled himself back to his feet. Arun shot him a hard look, but then grudgingly nodded.

“So now what are we going to do?” Mole asked. “Find another way?”

“I know of no other route into the Underdark,” Dannel said. “At least not for hundreds of miles.”

“That thing’s just going to wait for us down there, and we can’t attack it unless it comes out of the fissure,” Zenna said. “It seemed to regenerate very quickly the damage we inflicted upon it.”

“What if we cut the heads off?” Hodge suggested. “Seems like that’s where most of the danger be, if’n you ask me.”

“That would work, if you had fire or acid handy,” Dannel said. “But risky. Hydras have the ability to regrow lost heads; in fact, if you sever one and do not quickly seal the stump, two heads may regrow where one once was.”

“Well, blasted bloody damn!” Hodge exclaimed. “How we s’posed to beat such a thing?”

“I admit, I do not know,” Dannel said. “I doubt we could do enough damage from range to the body quickly enough to overcome its natural regeneration. And if we closed to melee, down there, it would quickly tear us apart. Those jaws are strong, like a dragon’s bite.”

The companions stood there, glum at their prospects. Mole, however, had taken off her magical backpack, and was trying to lift something bulky from inside. Zenna noticed her, and turned toward her.

“What are you doing?”

“Well,” Mole said, grunting with a bit of effort as she lifted a small cask—that should have been enough to fill the entire backpack by itself, had it not been magical—free and laid it on the ground. “That thing breathes frost, so I’d imagine that it doesn’t much like fire.”

Zenna wrinkled her forehead, not understanding, but Dannel had recognized the cask, heavily crusted with heavy sealant that oozed out from between the gaps in the wood. “Lamp oil?” he asked.

Mole grinned sheepishly. “Well...”

“No.” Zenna said. “Mole, tell me that you haven’t been carrying...”

“What?” Hodge said, looking at the cask curiously.

“Well, it worked so well when we were fighting the cult under Cauldron.”

“Mole...” Zenna said, stern disapproval in her voice.

“I’d consider ourselves quite fortunate that our friend here wasn’t caught in one of the breath attacks from that dragon,” Dannel said.

“What?” Hodge repeated, a confused look on his face.

Mole shrugged. “Okay, so it’s alchemist’s fire.”
 


Dungannon said:
Hmmm, maybe I've been without a MM for too long, but when did hydras get breath weapons?
Hydras normally do not have breath weapons, but when one is a cyro-hydra as I'm guessing this one is it gains a frosty breath weapon in each mouth.
 

Dungannon said:
Hmmm, maybe I've been without a MM for too long, but when did hydras get breath weapons?
Check out the hydras in the 3.5 SRD. Nasty critters. If it wasn't for the tactical situation favoring the adventures (i.e. the thing can't get to them if they retreat up the stairs), they'd already be frozen toast. As it is, there's one thing they don't know, however...
 

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