Shackled City Epic: "Vengeance" (story concluded)

Who is your favorite character in "The Shackled City"?

  • Zenna

    Votes: 27 29.7%
  • Mole

    Votes: 17 18.7%
  • Arun

    Votes: 31 34.1%
  • Dannel

    Votes: 10 11.0%
  • Other (note in a post)

    Votes: 6 6.6%

Chapter 343

The companions made their way swiftly down the connecting street that spilled out onto Obsidian Avenue. The city was strangely quiet, now, with most of its inhabitants having escaped to join the floods of refugees now streaming down the mountainside roads.

“How are we set for healing?” Arun asked, as they made their way to the end of the street, joining the main boulevard and heading toward the square in front of the town hall.

Despite her shorter stride, Mole’s magical boots allowed her to easily keep pace with the others, especially the heavily armored dwarves. “I have a few healing potions left,” she said. “The moderate-strength ones, I think.”

“Anyone else?” There was a grim silence punctuated by the tread of their boots upon the flat stones of the street. All of them knew what they were getting into. Arun shared out the last of the potions he’d bought from Weer the alchemist with Hodge and Beorna, downing the contents of the small vials as they ran to enhance their strength, endurance, and agility. Beorna in turn laid her hand upon the paladin’s shoulder, covertly placing a protective ward upon him that would hopefully spare him from the next assault he suffered.

That delay meant it was Dannel who first arrived in the great square that opened in front of the town hall. The place was a ruin now, with more than half of the buildings surrounding the square either collapsed or seriously damaged.

The elf turned as a loud noise echoed across the city, punctuated by a loud roar. Its source was visible an instant later as the dragon rose into view again, its massive wings beating the air as it lifted above the uneven line of rooftops, silhouetted against the plume still rising from the lake behind it. It had barely gained a hundred feet of clearance above the city skyline when it spread its wings and swept out over the city in what looked to be a resumption of its search, its dagger-shaped head scanning the streets below as it slid across Cauldron in a wide arc. At one point, it adjusted its course fractionally to avoid a farastu plummeting down into the volcano, but otherwise it seemed uninterested in the cataclysm gripping the town.

Dannel did not wait for the dragon to spot him. The song had filled him from the moment he’d first heard the dragon, and he as he tracked it with his eyes, a long arrow fitted to his longbow, he abruptly drew and aimed at an empty expanse of sky high above the city.

The elf had always been good with a bow, but in the last months his skills had advanced until he could rightly claim to be one of the foremost archers in the South. But with the song playing through him, binding him to the bow, he exceeded even his exceptional skills, and became one with the weapon.

The arrow... changed, as the song entered it, taking a part of the arcane archer and infusing his essence into the wood and feathers and steel. Every distraction faded into the background, and when Dannel finally released, it was as if the arrow sprung eagerly from the bow, ascending into the sky like a caged bird finally embracing its freedom.

Mole and the dwarves rushed into the square in time to see Dannel’s arrow rise high into the air, and as it reached its apogee and began to arc downward, eight hundred feet from the bow that had released it, it intersected with the dragon.

The arrow had lost much of its force, with such an insanely long shot, and against a flying target it lacked the ability to recapture some of its momentum as it descended back to earth. Against the dragon’s armored scales, the shot should have had no chance. But Dannel’s song still resonated in the missile, and as it struck the dragon just below the left shoulder the phase arrow knifed into its body, sending a clear message in the form of a lancing spear of pain.

Hookface got the message, and the dragon banked toward the square, hatred burning in its eyes as it instantly spotted the archer standing in the open in the middle of the square.
 

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Chapter 344

“Spread out, take cover!” Beorna yelled, rushing forward to a ruined storefront whose edge had collapsed into the square, offering at least a modicum of protection to an archer. As she ran, she called upon Helm, drawing her patron’s divine power into her, letting it fill her with the bright glow of divine energy. Arun and Hodge went the other way, slipping out toward a line of overturned wagons that had been abandoned in front of the barracks compound of the Watch adjoining the town hall. Mole, of course, was nowhere to be seen.

Dannel did not move toward cover, remaining fully exposed as the dragon dove toward him, releasing arrow after arrow in a staccato rhythm. The dragon was clearly magically protected, wreathed in a pale nimbus of soft red light that it wore like a suit of clothes. Dannel had used up his phase arrow, but as the dragon closed his shots grew more telling, and could punch through even the thick scales of the drake. But the hits that made it through were like mere pinpricks to the mature dragon, and it did not alter from its focus as it knifed through the air over the square, clearing the rooftops at its edge by mere feet.

As it flew past at high speed, it unleashed a great gout of explosive red fire into the square. The dragon pounded the air as it rose up out of the square, lifting into a broad turn, ignoring the projectiles fired by the dwarves that bounced harmless off its armored hide or stuck in the thick scales, doing no damage. Without the imparted magical energy of Dannel’s song, the missile weapons of the rest of the group had little chance of affecting the dragon.

The flames cleared to reveal a vast stretch of the square scorched black from the impact of the dragon’s breath. Dannel was still standing; he’d dodged aside at the last moment from the full force of the streaming flames, and Jenya’s protection from fire spell had held against the force of the dragon’s breath—this time.

But the dragon was already coming back for more. Winging out in a broad arc that took it out over the city walls, inducing yet another wave of panic in the fleeing townsfolk, it took its time scanning the threat, making a full circle around the town hall before turning into another descent approaching the square from the south, from the direction of the lake.

A great, fat bulbous mass descended from the sky, a kelubar demodand freed by the swirling interplanar vortex. The fiend, too foolish for its own good, dropped close enough to Hookface’s intented path to draw its attention, and the dragon paused to unleash its breath upon it, blasting through its resistances easily and charring its oily, sick hide. It tried to conjure up a cloud of acid to cover a hasty retreat, but the dragon simply ignored the obstacle, knifing through and seizing the demodand on the wing. Crushing it in its jaws, the dragon snapped its head and sent the hapless fiend flying down into the city, where it crashed nosily through an intact roof and disappeared from view.

The distraction gave Dannel time for a few more shots at long range, enough to draw a roar of anger from the dragon as it flapped its wings back into a swooping descent toward its foe.

“Take cover, ye daft elf!” Hodge blurted, lifting his crossbow for another shot. His last shot had struck the dragon to no effect, but there was nothing else he could do except keep shooting and hope for a miraculous impact that penetrated its thick hide. Arun, aided by divine favor and the considerable strength of his mighty bow, did manage a hit that punched through one of the dragon’s wings, but the hole was a handspan across in an expanse the size of a frigate’s mainsail, and hindered Hookface like a pin stuck in the flesh of an ogre.

But Dannel’s bow was another matter, and the elf’s fourth hit was a telling one, half the length of his arrow vanishing into the dragon’s thick neck. But he did not have time for another shot as the dragon bore down on him, ignoring the other foes whose attacks thus far had been trivial at best.

For a moment it looked like the dragon was going to drop to the ground and attack, but at the last moment it swept upward, unleashing another blast of flame at an almost horizontal angle ahead of it. There was no place for Dannel to dodge this time, and he took the full force of the dragon’s breath, flying backward to land charred and unmoving on the cobblestones. The flames penetrated to the wagons where Arun and Hodge had taken cover, although the barriers protected the dwarves from feeling little more than a brief rush of heat. The dragon soared upward, looking almost for a moment as though it would slam into the town hall, but once more it narrowly cleared the edge of the roof to sweep out over the structure’s central dome. But instead of banking to the left or right to avoid the spire that ascended from the cupola of the dome, the dragon reached out with both of its hind claws and took hold of that pinnacle, using it as a fulcrum to spin its massive body about and reverse its direction without sacrificing the full force of its momentum. The maneuver was too much for the building, and as the dragon leapt forward, diving once more back toward the square, the dome crumbled, and with a loud clatter of cracking stone and falling debris the whole structure collapsed in upon itself.

Beorna had leapt from cover as soon as she’d seen Dannel go down, and was kneeling at his side as the dragon rose up over the town hall. Like the others she’d assumed that it would gain altitude and come around for another pass, but her eyes widened in horror as Hookface completed its maneuver and bored down on them like a boulder hurled by a giant catapult.

Beorna healed Dannel and stood, drawing her holy sword and stepping forward to challenge the descending dragon. She opened her mind and soul to Helm once more, calling upon the power of the god to infuse her sword with the holy might to destroy the dragon. Helm answered her prayer, but before she could do anything further the dragon knifed down with incredible speed, lashing out its head like a whip to snatch her up in its maw with the crushing force of a vice. An instant later the dragon kicked off of the ground with both of its hind legs, narrowly avoiding crushing the semi-conscious Dannel, and then lifted back up into the air with the struggling templar trapped in its jaws.

Arun ran forward, loosing another useless arrow, too late to intervene as the dragon’s powerful wings carried it up over the city with its captive.
 

Lazybones said:
“Yer all insane,” Hodge said. “That ain’t no piddlin’ wyrmling yer wantin’ to pick a fight with! That there drake’s a fully-grown adult wyrm! Why, them things snack on giants fer breakfast! Yer all stark, blasted, raving...”

“Hodge,” Arun interrupted, without turning; he was preparing his own bow. His string had been broken during their encounters in the city, so Dannel gave him one of his spares. “Go with Jenya; she’ll need your help with the refugees.”

“Go stuff yerself.”

The paladin looked up. “Excuse me?”

“Ah, sorry. I mean, go stuff yerself, most holy champion o’ Moradin.” With an angry shake of his head, Hodge unlimbered his heavy crossbow and winch, and began loading the weapon, a more or less constant stream of muted curses accompanying every stage in the process.


Oh YEAH.

This is easily my favourite part of the story so far--and it's got some pretty stiff competition.
 

Short update today, cliffhanger tomorrow.

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Chapter 345

Beorna felt the rush of air past her as she tried to fight through the stabbing pain where the dragon’s teeth had driven through her armor and into her body. She still held her sword in one hand, but the other was pinned against her body in the drake’s mouth.

This wasn’t good. Even if she could get free, which was a dubious proposition considering the dragon’s incredible strength—the dragon’s grip felt like a house had fallen onto her—they were already a good hundred feet or more above the rooftops below. And from what she’d seen of the farastus that had fallen into the city, that wasn’t a path she felt much like taking.

But as the dragon gained more altitude, turning as it ascended, she realized that there weren’t any other options.

With a heave, she managed to free her other hand, but her location, with most of her body pinned inside the dragon’s mouth, made it almost impossible to position herself for an attack. And the dragon clearly wasn’t interested in keeping her alive; as she struggled she felt a sudden surge of heat wash over her, moments before a great gout of flame erupted from the dragon’s mouth, pouring over her like a skewered hunk of meat thrust into a bonfire. There was no place to go, no way to avoid the full force of the dragon’s breath, and only the protection spell laid upon her by Jenya earlier saved her from instantly being incinerated.

But she survived, and when she could actually draw a breath again, she gritted her teeth and ordered her arms to lift the sword dangling beneath her. Her helmet had fallen off at some point after the dragon had grabbed her, and the wind blew wildly through her hair. Her faith gave her the ability to call upon divine intervention to greatly increase her strength for a few flickering heartbeats, and she called upon that aid now as she lifted the sword and raised the tip of the blade against the base of the dragon’s jaw, the only vulnerable spot she could reach.

“For you, my lord Helm!” she cried, as she drove the blade home.
 

Ahem

You know, when most authors write a scene that starts with their hero clamped in the jaws of an angry dragon and ends when the hero stabs the dragon in the throat, it's called the Friday cliffhanger...

(And I'll bet a masterwork repeating heavy crossbow that Mole is standing on top of the dragon's back, reflecting on the interesting fact that when a dragon grapples someone by holding it in its mouth, it loses its dexterity bonus and becomes subject to sneak attacks.)
 

Right now Hookface is thinking:

"Darn. I should have grabbed that archer! I can snack on elves all day, but one dwarf really fills you up."

A well done story. I'm not sure how true it is that in nearly every single encounter someone's dropped to negative hit points... but then again, the Shackled City stuff did seem kinda mean.
 

ajanders said:
You know, when most authors write a scene that starts with their hero clamped in the jaws of an angry dragon and ends when the hero stabs the dragon in the throat, it's called the Friday cliffhanger...

Hey, there can be more than one cliffhanger/week! ;)

As for what's been up with Mole, we'll hear about that at the start of Ch.347... :D

P.S. Welcome to the story, Loincloth! Thanks for joining ENWorld to post here!

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Chapter 346

Arun watched in helpless horror as the dragon rose higher over the city, the struggling form of Beorna only just visible in its jaws. Behind him, Hodge was helping Dannel back to his feet.

“We’ve got to find a way to stop it!” Arun growled, furious at his own inability to come to grips with the enemy.

“Too... far...” Dannel gasped, staggering despite the healing that Beorna had poured into him. His garments were charred and his skin blackened from the effects of the dragon’s breath, although he still held his bow tightly in one hand.

But as they watched, the dragon started to turn, forming a wide arc over the city.

“It’s comin’ back!” Hodge said.

“No... look!” the sharp-eyed elf cried. They saw the dragon’s flame jetting in a forked stream from the sides of its mouth, each felt a pang as they realized that Beorna, trapped in its jaws, had been squarely in the path of that blast. They were too far away to see Beorna’s heroic action, lifting her sword into place and calling upon Helm’s strength as she slammed it into the base of the dragon’s skull. But they did see the dragon suddenly snap its head back, a terrible sound erupting from within, and they could see the templar flying free, a black figure that plummeted quickly toward the ground several hundred feet below.

Arun looked beseechingly at Dannel, who possessed the power of feather fall, but the elf grimly shook his head. “Too far,” he said, but they started running anyway, toward the point where Beorna had fallen behind the line of rooftops on the eastern edge of the square.

Above, the dragon circled the city, unleashing a roar of fury and pain that echoed through the volcano.

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It only took them a few minutes to reach their destination, even with the scattered debris and the wide cracks that marked the once-smooth course of the boulevard. Arun, fueled by a growing sense of dread, was almost able to pace Dannel down the broad length of Obsidian Avenue, the two leaving Hodge slightly behind. When they saw where the templar had fallen to earth, each felt a strange sense of significance, as if the odd ironies of the world had come together to confirm an inevitable outcome.

The Temple of Helm was largely intact, although the empty stables had collapsed in upon themselves, and one side of the rectory showed a gaping hole above a long crack in the foundation facing the courtyard. But their eyes were drawn to the stairs leading up to the foyer, where the double doors stood open into the vacant sanctuary of the temple.

Beorna lay near the head of the steps, surrounded by bits of rubble. She’d impacted the stone arch overhanging the foyer solidly, an adamantine-encased missile that had plunged through the two-foot-thick canopy and fallen hard onto the carpeted marble below. Her helmet had been lost, along with her sword, and one glance was enough to reveal that life had fled the battered form of Beorna, templar of Helm.

Arun’s cry filled the sanctuary, as he fell to his knees before the broken body of the woman he’d loved.

Behind him, Dannel entered the foyer, his eyes lowered. But a moment later another cry echoed the paladin’s, a familiar sound that was followed by the rush of wind and the flap of powerful wings.

“It’s back,” Dannel said.

Arun looked up, and his eyes were cold like anvils as he threw his shield aside, and took up his holy sword in both hands as he stood, turning back toward the street.
 

"Cold like anvils" is a somewhat weird expression. I understand it fits dwarven nature, but even so, it made me pause in my reading. And, heh heh, I was arguing for you to let Zenna die... But instead you kill another character.

And I note that, once again, the party's cleric is dead. :b

I'm looking forward to more, Lazybones. I wonder if Hookface will be foolish enough to come within melee range of the revenge-bent Arun?
 

come on LB why all the cool characters..why couldnt it be zenna in those jaws eh!!! if hodge snuffs it again ill take it your prejudiced against the beareded folk..you ceratinly have something agianst clerics!!!!!!!
 

Ack !

No Friday Update!!?!!

Ack

Times like these make me recall the lessons I learned as a child . . .

'when in danger or in doubt
run in circles scream and shout'

EEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :lol:
 

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