SPACE CEILOPIESHE try this new RPG system...[2nd adv. now available]9.4

[Felikeries]

There is one mini'ish adventure for this currently in the house rules another
is in the works,however as for conversions for foes,creatures etc,that is
still in the works as well...

 

[Felikeries]

There is one mini'ish adventure for this currently in the house rules another
is in the works,however as for conversions for foes,creatures etc,that is
still in the works as well...

bump

 

[aurance]

Ok, it's obvious you've put a lot of work into this, and there is a lot of creativity there...

But since you are essentially creating a whole new rules set, it would help quite a bit if you put more explanatory headings and descriptions. And you use a lot of new terms which need clarification. Everytime a reader first sees a new term, reading from the top down, you need to give it a definition.

You also need to separate out your rules into clearly defined chapters - I suggest just taking the chapter headings from the PHB and replacing them with your own material.

 

[Felikeries]

wow somebody looked at it...

now then...

Actually the explainations for example concerning Ceilopieshe or
Detrevient,or Classes is actually there,so i'm forced to ask for an
example of witch unknown term may need more writing

as well as see if this is cool,it's pretty well set except for 'foe' templates

this an adventure











adventure

 

[aurance]

Oh boy, an example. Well there are a LOT of things which need some clarification.

Ok, first page. You start listing:

"Feritioner
2d8,3d8,5d10,5d20 [+10,1 re-roll,-5=1 re-roll]

Courtier
4d6,5d8,5d10,4d10 [+1d10,1d10,-4=1d20]" etc. etc.

And I'm left wondering what the heck?

It isn't until a bit later that you get into what those things mean, and I'm still not clear 100%.

Put a heading in front of all that, called "Classes." Then explain each class right after it's first mentioned. And what are all those die rolls? Hit dice? Attack mechanic? Damage? What?

 

[Felikeries]

There is a 2nd adv. that's at section IIIb currently
'fields of confusion' is the name it's more for
a party staring level 4 to 6

Anybody who tries this will have a fun go i think with the adventure
link at the previous post,then i'll know somebody needs 'fields' for
more of that Space Ceilopieshe fun

 

[Felikeries]

what in the world else could there be to make you're Aug
days better than the 2nd adv,there may be more however
this is the current version

Field of Confusion

 

[Anabstercorian]

Aurance, Felikeries has some sort of disorder which prevents him from communicating coherently over the internet or recognizing his communication problems. You're not going to make a lot of progress, I'm afraid.

 

[Felikeries]

whatever stop being such a baboon....the facts that are layd in the
system doc. are easy to see for what they are,that the Energy rollers and how their done are first rather than class style descriptions,is a very moot interest if you asked me

now then taking a look at this new adventure,what about it,any words of value,interest,fun......

I know that the 'beast,foe,monster' etc templates have yet to be performed,written,and agreed as to what they should be,a few items of interest were stated by me in the 'house rukles' for this,so you EnWorld RPG
wild adventurers should be quite a good 'pie slice' of pro-interest players etc to take a stab at the real answers,making sure to make no unwarrented sameness to any6 other RPG element

 

[HeapThaumaturgist]

Just a quick question, not meant to offend in any way:

Are you a native English speaker/writer?

--fje