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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Fangor the Fierce" data-source="post: 4465477" data-attributes="member: 17100">Wren's Changes - Tentative upon approvalOk, Here goes the Changes to Wren:7 pp to spend, Increase Toughness & Skill Caps to PL 122pp to CON1pp to Skills +4 to Concentration4pp to Device Ability Scores---------(30pp)[sblock=Ability Scores CHANGES]Strength: 14 (+2)Dexterity: 12 (+1)Constitution: 24 (+7)Intelligence: 10 (+0)Wisdom: 12 (+1)Charisma: 18 (+4)[/sblock]Saves---------(25pp)[sblock=Saves CHANGES]Toughness: +14 (+7 Con, +7 Force Field)Fortitude: +11 (+7 Con) 4ppReflex: +9 (+1 Dex) 8ppWillpower: +14 (1 Wis) 13pp[/sblock]Combat---------(16pp)[sblock=Combat NO Changes]Attack Bonus: +5 (+7 Ranged, +11 Cosmic Array Attacks) 10ppDamage Bonus: Unarmed +2 (Bruise)Grapple: +5Defense Bonus: +9 (+3 Base, +6 Dodge) 6ppInitiative: +1[/sblock]Skills---------(15pp)[sblock=Skills CHANGES]Bluff - 0 (+4)=4Climb - 0 (+4)=4Concentration – 16r (+1)=17Diplomacy - 10r (+4)=14Disguise - 0 (+4)=4Escape Artist - 0 (+1)=1Gather Info - 10 (+4)=14Handle Animal - 0 (+4)=4Intimidate - 0 (+4)=4Notice - 12r (+1)=13Search - 0 (+0)=0Sense Motive – 12r (+1)=13Stealth - 0 (+1)=1Survival - 0 (+1)=1Swim - 0 (+2)=2[/sblock]Feats---------(22pp)[sblock=Feats NO CHANGES]Dodge Focus (6): +6 dodge bonusEidetic Memory (): Perfect recall of everything you have experiencedFearless (): Immunity to fear effectsAttack Focus Ranged (2): +2 bonus on ranged attacksAttack Specialization (2): +4 bonus to Cosmic Array AttacksLeadership (): Spend Hero point to remove adverse condition from allyInspire (4): Grant allies +4 to attacks, saves, & checks by spending Hero PointInterpose (): Can switch places with Adjacent ally as Reaction for defending attacksLuck (2): Gain 2 Hero PointsUncanny Dodge (); Retain Dodge bonus while Flat-Footed, Sight DependentPrecise Shot (): No penalty for shooting or throwing into melee[/sblock]Innate Powers---------(21pp)[sblock=Innate Powers NO CHANGES]Immunity 5Effect: DefenseRange: PersonalAction: ReactionDuration: PermanentSuffocation [+2], Aging [+1], Disease [+1], Poison [+1]Total Cost: (5pp) Force Field 7Effect: DefenseRange: PersonalAction: FreeDuration: SustainedExtras: Impervious [+7]Flaws: NonePower Feats: NoneDrawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (14pp) Flight 3 (Cosmic Board)Effect: MovementRange: PersonalAction: Move (Active)Duration: SustainedExtras: NoneFlaws: Platform [-1]Power Feats: NoneDrawbacks: Reduced Load [-1] (Medium Load)Total Cost: (2pp)[/sblock]Device Powers---------(46pp)[sblock=Device CHANGES]Ring of Cosmic Channeling-This is his lone item from his home-world. It is a testament to his race’s abilities to harness Cosmic Energy and channel it through a medium. Finding that rings are easier to handle, it was decided that all others of his race would have identical rings to identify themselves to each other. Each of these rings is imbued with an array of powers that are at the users disposal, although they are independent of each other. Only one power can be effectively used each time the ring is used. Guardian's ring is tuned to his own life, and will not work for anyone else, and can not be used against himself. Device 11 (4/rank)Effect: GeneralRange: PersonalAction: ReactionDuration: Permanent (Innate)4 point per rank option, Ring is Focus of Cosmic Power and Hard to loseExtras: NoneFlaws: NonePower Feats: Restrictions [2] (His Use Only)Drawbacks: *Recharge*Total Cost: (46pp)*Allows 55pp for Device Powers Super Strength 1+5 to Strength scoreType: TraitRange: PersonalAction: None (Passive)Duration: ContinuousExtras: NoneFlaws: NonePower Feats: NoneDrawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (2pp) Cosmic Awareness – Sense the use of powers or effects of Cosmic Energy.Super Senses 1Effect: SensoryRange: PersonalAction: None (Passive)Duration: ContinuousExtras: NoneFlaws: NonePower Feats: NoneDrawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (1pp) Regeneration 2Effect: AlterationRange: PersonalAction: ReactionDuration: PermanentResurrection x2 (1 Day)Extras: NoneFlaws: NonePower Feats: RegrowthDrawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (3pp)[/sblock] Cosmic Energy Control (2/rank)[sblock=Array Powers CHANGES]Array 21 (42base,+7AP) 49pp Cosmic Energy Control (Blast) 11 (3/rank)Effect: Attack (+11)Range: Ranged (110')Action: StandardDuration: InstantExtras: Autofire [+1], Partial Penetrating [3+1=4]Flaws: NonePower Feats: Affects Insubstantial x2Drawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (39/42pp) Alt Power 1Deflect Rank 10 (4/rank)Effect: Defense (Block +10, -2 per additional)Range: Touch/(1000’max, 100' Increments)Action: StandardDuration: Instant3 Points per Rank Option - All ranged and mental attacksExtras: Ranged (Increment of 10’x Power Rank) [+1]Flaws: NonePower Feats: Triggered x2Drawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (42/42pp) Alt Power 2Paralyzing Strike 11 (2/rank)Effect: Attack (+11)Range: TouchAction: StandardDuration: InstantExtras: Partial Penetrating [3+1=4] / NoneFlaws: None / Sense Dependant (Sight)Power Feats: Incurable, Affect Insubstantial x2, Accuracy, Knockback x5Total Cost: (24pp+11pp=35/42pp ) Alt Power 3Snare 11 (3/rank)Effect: Attack (+11)Range: RangedAction: StandardDuration: InstantExtras: Transparent [+1]Flaws: NonePower Feats: Reversible, Tether, Affect Insubstantial x2Drawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (37pp/42pp) Alt Power 4Heal 10 (3/rank)Effect: AlterationRange: Touch/RangedAction: StandardDuration: InstantExtras: Action [+1]Flaws: NonePower Feats: Persistent, Regrowth, StabilizeDrawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (33/42pp) Alt Power 5Create Objects 9 (4/rank)Effect: GeneralRange: RangedAction: StandardDuration: ContinuousExtras: Movable [+1], Duration (Continuous) [+1]Flaws: NonePower Feats: Innate, Precise, Stationary, Subtle, Tether, Progression (10’Cube x rank)Total Cost: (42/42pp) Alt Power 6Cosmic Energy Control (Blast) 11 (3/rank)Effect: Attack (+11)Range: Ranged (100'max, -1 dmg per 10’)Action: StandardDuration: InstantExtras: Area Burst[+1]Flaws: NonePower Feats: Affects Insubstantial x2, Knockback x3Drawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (38/42pp) Alt Power 7Teleport 6 (6/rank)Type: MovementRange: PersonalAction: Move (active)/Full RoundDuration: InstantExtras: Accurate [+1], Affects Others [+1], Area [+1], Selective [+1]Flaws: NonePower Feats: Change Velocity, Easy, Turnabout, Progression x3Drawbacks: NoneTotal Cost: (42/42pp)[/sblock]Drawbacks------------[sblock=drawbacks and Totals]Ring of Cosmic Channeling requires a daily recharge from him. This can be anytime the ring is out of energy, usually lasting 23 hours at a time. After 23 hours of no recharging, the ring’s powers are lost. Recharging the ring is a meditative focus, where he has to have the following circumstances; the ring, a cosmic focus (single star, the moon, or the sun), and one hour of meditation. Meditation is a relative term, up to the GM’s discretion. Upon completion, the ring is recharged for another 23 hours of powers.Type: Power Loss (*Recharge* Daily)Frequency DC5Severity DC5 (-3pp)----------Trade Offs------------Defense -2, Toughness +2----------Cost Summary---------Abilities: 30Combat: 16Saves: 25Skills: 15Feats: 22Powers: 67Drawbacks: -3Total Cost: 172/172[/sblock]  Ok, in a nutshelld, here goes the reasons for power changes, AP by AP...  1 - Cosmic Energy Control Blast Array Power ONLY increased the Penetration by 1, to total of Partial Penetrating 4, leaving 3pp left on that power. When the Power Cap is increased on Wren, I will then disperse those last 3pp to increase the Power to Blast 12, appropriately leveling him.  2 -Deflect increased 1 Power Rank, increased range, and Block +10. Improves his defending, but not an ability he uses a lot.  3 - Biggest Change, Paralyzing Strike. Increased original Strike 11 to include a Paralyzing Linked power. Meets all requirements of linked power, with range, duration, action, power level, by adding a flaw in the linked effect requiring SIGHT from foe to work. Think of it as Cosmic Strike, with energized surge of cosmic energy that blinds the foe with paralyzing effect. I also added +1 to Partial Penetrating to result in Partial Penetrating 4. Question is, the Power Feats were originally designed for the Strike Power, but would I be able to move some over to be power feats for the Paraylzing Power instead? Such as Knockback5? My thinking was that the attack would possibly hit. Targets have 2 saves. Strike Save and Paralyzing Save. They fail the strike, they take the dmg. They fail the Paralyzing save, they are then subject to the Knockback from the power and the paralyze. Or am I totally messing things up by using Power Feats on this?  5 - Create Objects changes to rank 9, nothing big.  6 - Teleport Power added, only rank 6, and allows a few special power feats that he's going to need with the group. Area, selective, Affects Others, and Accurate coupled with Change Velocity, Turnabout, Easy, and Progressions allows easy extraction ability to not too far locations.  So, I await the critique... which I am sure I messed some things up. Hopefully not alot...</blockquote>

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