Hello
First of all sorry for the late answer, but I am having quite a crazy week
My first impresion afer a quick read was, OK, you need more time to reed it in deep, I mean, it is quite complex. what is nice.
After a carefully read I like it a lot, I think is has been well introduced the idea that you are in a weird place controled by something you can not completelly understad, and still is not so easy get killed.
And I pass to spoilers
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I like quite a lot the different decisions Players have to do, as usuall the "evil solution" seems easyer to carry, but it have some moral decisions that at least my group will enjoy playing.
The role of the bearded demon (I wish it is correct , english is not my first languaje and I usually dont play in english) is one of the best antagonists (or not) that I have seen at this level in much time and al posible social interaction with him (and with Vuhl) can be very interesting
Also I like the idea of sobrenatural habilities gotten when killing Trillith
There is one thing that I dont like very much, how Indomitable avoids Players going on the road, by putting a huge and ugly monster (a pyrohidra) in their road, is a quite common way to avoid it and so a bit "cliche", but I must say also that I dont find a better way, I will coment if I have a good idea about it
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Well, when prepairing it in deep I will coment more precise details
Now, back to work