The Sudden Approach of Unexplainable Power: OOC

[Nonlethal Force]

Yeah. Fair warning, though. I am going back over it and correcting mistakes - mostly unfortunate typos. I don't find many per post, but enough to make it worth my while. If you look at the edit tags at the bottom of the posts you'll know where I stopped editing. Oh, I've also change the main red dragon's name by deleting a syllable to make it more pronouncable.

 

[unleashed]

Fair enough, though by the time I get to reading it, you might have finished with the corrections.

 

[Nonlethal Force]

XP Awarded - Cha Ching

For reasons of handily defeating the common thugs, Aekalos receives 150 XP. {They really were pretty sorry opponents, but the encounter turned out well anyway!} For reasons of good RPing in the Bloody Ale and against the dastardly duo on the street Aekalos receives another 150 XP.

 

[unleashed]

Experience added to character sheet.

 

[unleashed]

So how's your other solo game going?

 

[Nonlethal Force]

Going fairly well. We had a bit of a stall when I got busy there for a week and another bit of a stall this past week, but that's to be expected when in a game of two one person gets busy. But it still seems to be going well.

 

[unleashed]

Okay, I've started reading your story hour, and I noticed a few errors which I thought I'd mention.

In Post #3
As Rhema took of her robe and folded it (should be off)

Once he was done folding his own robe he placed t beside Rhema’s own navy blue cloak. (should be it)

 

[Nonlethal Force]

Thanks. Those are the kind of errors I catch as well. Spell check and grammar check works really well. Words with double letters and 2 letter words in which I type too fast and miss a letter are my bane!

Even in my posting here, theose two types of errors are my biggest challenge.

 

[Nonlethal Force]

In Post #3
As Rhema took of her robe and folded it (should be off)

Once he was done folding his own robe he placed t beside Rhema’s own navy blue cloak. (should be it)

Fixed!

I should say that I am glad you could at least make it to the third post!

 

[unleashed]

Oh, I'll read the rest in due time, and I would have read more when I did, but I had other things to do.