The Sudden Approach of Unexplainable Power: OOC

[Nonlethal Force]

Well, I was thinking about it. That and gnolls. But like you said .. those names are safe in the SRD.

Of course things like orcs, elves, and dwarves are safe from fantasy in general. Depends on how much work I want to do and how far I want it to deviate from standard D&D conceptions.

By the way ... In the CLutches of Evil OOC post ... I hope I wasn't too hard on Bloodweaver. I wasn't trying to be mean. Just honest about the submission guidelines and the realization that I do have two decent submissions.

 

[unleashed]

In any case it's hard to talk about Bloodweaver's potential sugestion if one even comes after the deadline.

Yeah, the end could be interpretted as a little harsh, but replacing the bolded section with without seeing a character submission would seem a little less so.

 

[Nonlethal Force]

Good call. Thanks. That's why I asked ... it didn't feel right. It's already been changed.

Although to be honest, I didn't mean it like that. I meant that it might not come since he realized the deadline was already missed. It wasn't meant as a slam....

 

[unleashed]

Yeah, I realised you didn't mean it like that, but that interpretation is fairly easy to come by if you're not having a good day.

 

[unleashed]

Well, I guess I'd better get back to reading your first story hour, so I can then move on to the next one.

 

[Nonlethal Force]

Heh. That's funny!

I've finally finished editing the first one, so it should be a pretty clean read. {No absolute guarantees, though. I'm sure there are a few mistakes that remain!}

 

[unleashed]

You do know that the rest break/taking of food was supposed to be an additonal layer of subterfuge on top of ‘watching the shop surreptitiously’ right? I know I could have been clearer, but Aekalos was trying to hide at least a little so it didn't look like they were watching the shop.

 

[Nonlethal Force]

Oh, sorry. I misread it then. I thought that he was intentionally not hiding totally so that he wouldn't appear sneaky. In other words, by sitting out where some can see, he would appear as though he awas just taking a break.

My mistake. In either case, the stranger hasn't seen the party. So, if you want them more hidden ... not a problem to change at all!

 

[unleashed]

Nope, my fault, I read something into it that wasn't there. Just ignore me in this case.

 

[Nonlethal Force]

Oh. Okay. Was it the last line about making no attempt to hide? Because all that was supposed to mean is that they aren't hiding behind things to conceal their presence. It isn't meant to mean that they are actively going about making their presence known. Simply that the figure hasn't spotted them in spite of their surreptitious surveilance under the guise ofnot caring. Boy this is getting confusing even for me!