I'm about half-way through and one thing that bothers me about the full color version is that the text crams right up against the green top border. In the print version there is white space between the black line and the text and that is so much nicer on the eye.
Nice work. And as much material as you pulled in from other works (my, that section 15 is huge), I wish you had included the masterwork components stuff from Bad Axe's HOHF: Elves. No big deal, it just would have been nice to have all the archery stuff in one place.
And while it affects nothing, the mixed Upper case/lower case font the title appears in just gets on my nerves. How long did it take to create? (And I hate that font in Diablo II, too.)