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Message: <blockquote data-quote="nevin" data-source="post: 9197080" data-attributes="member: 7024481">it seems a little unfocused.  Reading through all that I still don't really have a feel for what the game is supposed to be like.  Nothing about the empire other than they exist, no reasons for why the "good guys" are fighting them.   from a marketing perspective you should be giving the reader of the web page something to make them WANT to go defeat the empire.  Right now it's so generic I don't even know if the empire or the players are the bad guys.  Looks like you've put a ton of work into it but  it needs something to grab the reader right off the bat and make them want to get involved.edit:  I'd probably play up the suicide squad, and desperation vibe, of the empire that is desperate enough to empty it's prisons to avoid annihilation.</blockquote>