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<blockquote data-quote="Ltheb Silverfrond" data-source="post: 3508794" data-attributes="member: 39867"><p>Well, unfortunately my new computer, which uses vista (bad idea), is so slow I can barely run Adobe. (It should be pretty fast but because of vista...) I had compiled a bit of editing/proof-readeing/etc but after getting through chapter 4 it crashed, and I lost a good bit of it. (evidently Adobe + Word = Crash with Vista)I still have an older version of the editing document from an earlier attempt, but it doesn't cover much. None the less, I hope it helps.</p><p>Also, a few of the changes might have been corrected in your last release, but I didn't see any in a quick run through. </p><p></p><p>[sblock]</p><p>Text:</p><p>Omnific Abilities:</p><p>Absolute - "Benifit" text on table is a bit misleading, sortof.</p><p>Akashic [Effect] - "Destroys" 1 divine rank is pretty vague. Perhaps an additional sentence to spell out all that implies?</p><p>Indissouluble - The "Special" line - I would avoid using the word "basically"; it (to me) doesn't sound professional.</p><p>Infinite [Ability Score] - Table still references infinite charisma specifically. </p><p>Oblivion - Text for it's benifit are not finished.</p><p>Transient Powers:</p><p>Transtemporal - The Divinity template writeups note you gain triple actions against opponents. The actual power does not list it.</p><p>Rules:</p><p>Omnific Abilities:</p><p>Absolute - I see a bit of cheese with this. I could give a million mortals 1 divine rank. Much cheaper than getting 1 mortal with a million divine ranks. (Though they are easily cleaved)</p><p>Omnidimentional - Does this work outside of combat? It seems to auto-trump everything else if it does. (Perhaps a restriction that a deity must dismiss them for some reason?)</p><p>Omnipersonal - Transpersonal seems to do the same thing. Perhaps they need better defining.</p><p>Transient Powers:</p><p>Transgenic - On what "level" are you immune to the thing that kills you? IE If I kill you with an ultima beam, lets say, are you immune to my ultima beam, ultima beams in general, or the ultima [effect]?</p><p>[/sblock]</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ltheb Silverfrond, post: 3508794, member: 39867"] Well, unfortunately my new computer, which uses vista (bad idea), is so slow I can barely run Adobe. (It should be pretty fast but because of vista...) I had compiled a bit of editing/proof-readeing/etc but after getting through chapter 4 it crashed, and I lost a good bit of it. (evidently Adobe + Word = Crash with Vista)I still have an older version of the editing document from an earlier attempt, but it doesn't cover much. None the less, I hope it helps. Also, a few of the changes might have been corrected in your last release, but I didn't see any in a quick run through. [sblock] Text: Omnific Abilities: Absolute - "Benifit" text on table is a bit misleading, sortof. Akashic [Effect] - "Destroys" 1 divine rank is pretty vague. Perhaps an additional sentence to spell out all that implies? Indissouluble - The "Special" line - I would avoid using the word "basically"; it (to me) doesn't sound professional. Infinite [Ability Score] - Table still references infinite charisma specifically. Oblivion - Text for it's benifit are not finished. Transient Powers: Transtemporal - The Divinity template writeups note you gain triple actions against opponents. The actual power does not list it. Rules: Omnific Abilities: Absolute - I see a bit of cheese with this. I could give a million mortals 1 divine rank. Much cheaper than getting 1 mortal with a million divine ranks. (Though they are easily cleaved) Omnidimentional - Does this work outside of combat? It seems to auto-trump everything else if it does. (Perhaps a restriction that a deity must dismiss them for some reason?) Omnipersonal - Transpersonal seems to do the same thing. Perhaps they need better defining. Transient Powers: Transgenic - On what "level" are you immune to the thing that kills you? IE If I kill you with an ultima beam, lets say, are you immune to my ultima beam, ultima beams in general, or the ultima [effect]? [/sblock] [/QUOTE]
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