jester47
First Post
2 things will give your descriptions more power:
Weather and Scenery. These are so overlooked its not even funny.
Some distance away you see an old ruined temple with a path leading through the graveyard to the entrance.
or
As you make your way north from the shores of the Wyvernwater, the low overcast sky begins to spit rain at you. After an hour of trugeing through the hills on a path that is fast turning to mud, you see up ahead what appears to be an old abandoned temple perched on the side of a low hill, with a tower that has a dangerous looking lean to it. Ivy seems to have overgrown half of it. In the foreground you can see the beginnings of the Hullack forest and beyond the low wide slopes of the thunder peaks, their tops obscured by clouds...
Weather and Scenery. These are so overlooked its not even funny.
Some distance away you see an old ruined temple with a path leading through the graveyard to the entrance.
or
As you make your way north from the shores of the Wyvernwater, the low overcast sky begins to spit rain at you. After an hour of trugeing through the hills on a path that is fast turning to mud, you see up ahead what appears to be an old abandoned temple perched on the side of a low hill, with a tower that has a dangerous looking lean to it. Ivy seems to have overgrown half of it. In the foreground you can see the beginnings of the Hullack forest and beyond the low wide slopes of the thunder peaks, their tops obscured by clouds...
