WFRP Adventure Draft Needs Review

[Emirikol]

Here is the 1st draft for my Ratter #8 WFRP Fanzine adventure entry. Feedback is very welcome (yes, be critical). Commenting is also enabled in the Google Doc. My deadline is March 1st.
TIA

The Halfling and the Slayer

The Halfling and The Slayer An Adventure for Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay By Jay Alexander Hafner @Tydirium-Jay HIllustration by Alan Bajrić [@Alan_B], Map by the author. Thanks to @Stan, @EradicoParavis, @Irongutz, @Snoopzilla,@Tizok, @Soon™, @Moss, Arthur F., Keith P, for additional feedb...

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[pogre]

Good luck! Looks like a fun adventure. It would not have such a happy ending for me - I made a note to say as much.

 

[aco175]

This is for Warhammer, in case others were confused like me.