None of these excite me. None of them tell me what kind of campaign it is, what we will achieve or who we are as players. There's no mention of powerful artifacts to be found, a winter queen who's sorrow has put the land in a frozen time or a fierce dragon having burnt a path through a kingdom now in shambles.
I personally get excited by an interesting story hook or a fun setting. Theros, Ixalan, Eberron, anything out of the ordinary.
The examples below are how I personally try to entice players. I know this goes way beyond what you might be looking for.