What have you done to my Underdark Fey thread?

[shivamuffin]

Have you worked some good criticism for me yet or too busy getting ready for gaming?

If it's ok with your editor/publisher, I would post it at ROE for some critique. They'll pick it apart and find all sorts of things that could be wrong, or atleast question the material. It sucks sometimes, but it's a great way to make a work of genius even better. 99.9% of the time you won't have to edit after some of those guys finish with the material, especially mechanics!

I thought it was very cool, but I'm an editor's nightmare!

 

[Krishnath]

Noone?

 

[Clay_More]

http://www.realmsofevil.net/cgi-bin/forums/YaBB.cgi?board=womb;action=display;num=1052402670

Thats the link to where I posted it on RoE. Krish, unfortunately, I didn't bring my disc with the document, so untill I can deliver to you, there's nothing left but waiting.

Anyways, got some great comments already. Go go go go

 

[Krishnath]

Thank you for the link, I will be sure to check it out.

Anyways, back to the new dragon *WE* are making, the Inexecalan Wyrm (and I know I'm repetetive, but until I get an answer, I'll continue to be.): What die type should the breathweapon deal, d4, d6, d8, d10, or d12, and (yes this is a two part question) how many damage die should it deal from the start? (assuming that the number of damage die increases by two at each age category.)

Please, answer post haste.

 

[Clay_More]

I would say something relatively low, like d6, and then let it have more interesting special abilities. Name sounds like something that should have cool abilities instead of brute force

gogogogo read it Mr. Jensen

 

[Krishnath]

A d6 it is then, alrighty, how many as a wyrmling 1,2,3, or 4?

As for the post on RoE, I have only one thing to say: WHOA!

 

[Clay_More]

I would go with 4, make it a little powerful. Wyrm sounds a little strong.

Hey, so, any comments on the Grafts other than the word of Appreciation? Its many hours of work after all

 

[Krishnath]

4d6 it is then. Time for the starting STR of the wyrmling. As the wyrmling dragon is medium-sized due to it's starting HD. The average str of a medium-sized dragon is 13. And the question is, should it's str be high (+2), Average (+0), or Weak (-2)?

Also, for your grafts and stuff, I think my response in my former post pretty much sums it up in one word: WHOA! I am definetly getting the book when it is finished.

 

[shivamuffin]

Here here! I'll put in some OT to get a copy!

 

[Krishnath]

Ah, mister muffin man Do you have any suggestions for the dragons strenght, should it be good (17), Average (15), or Bad (13)? Remember, this is just for the medium-sized wyrmling