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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Berandor" data-source="post: 1338746" data-attributes="member: 225">Before I do that: Don't use the time constraint as an excuse - you didn't have to write 27 pages in 2 days, you could have just written five. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin    :D"  data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" /> (this may look like it, but I'm not really reprimanding you here)As for Shogun, that's what came to my mind when I read it. Can't help it <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />I didn't get the karmic quality of Lillabo's death, I must admit. Also I just feel it very harsh because while she killed Tarnby (in fact, cursed him to a worse fate), I don't regard that as an act punishable by death - in fantasy terms (not Real Life).Yarn, Maypole, Volpe, Minds - they all depend on women? <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /> (I will re-read it momentarily)I actually like that you chose to complete the story, as I always like risk-taking, and you obviously took one.Hmm. [spoiler]They're unfinished. Yes, they need to be finished by a woman. But I feel like I miss something. Argh![/spoiler]Anyway, I hope you're child is well again.</blockquote>

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