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<blockquote data-quote="Piratecat" data-source="post: 1346431" data-attributes="member: 2"><p>Well, <em>that's</em> over. A few thoughts -</p><p></p><p>Frankly, I think both stories would be greatly improved by substantial editing (in Sialia's case for length, in my case for several plot holes.) I don't think either story is our strongest effort. But I absolutely think the right person won, and I couldn't be prouder of who I lost to! Nicely done, Sialia, and that was the kind of story I feel really, really good facing off against. You're making me a better writer just by reading your stories, and that's a valuable thing.</p><p></p><p>In retrospect, I should have tossed the horror story half a day earlier and spent the extra time polishing the plot of my second effort. Sialia's tale may be weaker because it's too long, but mine is too short - and too short in the wrong ways. On an earlier page Berandor did a good deconstruction of some of its weak points that I generally agree with. I may just rewrite this to see what it could have been.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Piratecat, post: 1346431, member: 2"] Well, [i]that's[/i] over. A few thoughts - Frankly, I think both stories would be greatly improved by substantial editing (in Sialia's case for length, in my case for several plot holes.) I don't think either story is our strongest effort. But I absolutely think the right person won, and I couldn't be prouder of who I lost to! Nicely done, Sialia, and that was the kind of story I feel really, really good facing off against. You're making me a better writer just by reading your stories, and that's a valuable thing. In retrospect, I should have tossed the horror story half a day earlier and spent the extra time polishing the plot of my second effort. Sialia's tale may be weaker because it's too long, but mine is too short - and too short in the wrong ways. On an earlier page Berandor did a good deconstruction of some of its weak points that I generally agree with. I may just rewrite this to see what it could have been. [/QUOTE]
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