Final Check: Doren Kane
Looks good. The only error I found was a minor one in equipment: level 1 potions are 50gp purchase price each, not 25gp. I suspect you may have been thinking the cost to make one. As a quick fix, I trimmed the number you got for your 50gp to one. I don't normally do this, but with 100% sell back, you can go and make another selection if you wish, even before the first adventure.
STAMP! Doren Kane has his first, non-judge APPROVAL.
Feel fee to participate in roleplay in the Dunn Wright Inn until you have your judge approval and a DM sending out invites to adventure.