I regret my use of internal monologue to convey Aeiyan's point of view.
I have edited my IC post to be much more minimal, partly in consideration of the fact that it is not currently Aeiyan's turn.
Worse, I failed to roleplay the upgrade I had made to Aeiyan's Personality Trait #2: Proverbal: "Enunciate your vocabules, and let us speak of things."
(If I had roleplayed that properly, he would have made a fuller comment during his own turn, explicitly stating what he meant, instead of indulging in internal monologue.)