[MENTION=51271]Voda Vosa[/MENTION], I looked over Clock-head. A couple of things you might want to tweak:
I saw your background was Deserter, but I didn't see any benefit from the background.
You might prefer Eldritch Fusillade Expertise over Crossbow Expertise (since the latter does not apply to implement attacks). You'd lose the benefit against cover/concealment, but you'd gain a feat. At the least, take EFE over Rapid Reload so you can "upgrade" the free Versatile Expertise to Skill Training (or Linguist, or similar).
[sblock=Eldritch Fusillade Expertise]Eldritch Fusillade Expertise
Your hands move with surety of purpose and economy
of motion as you prepare to unleash a torrent
of bolts, both magical and physical, against your
enemies.
Prerequisite: Artificer, Crossbow Caster feat
Benefit: You gain a +1 feat bonus to attack rolls
that you make with a crossbow or a wand. This bonus
increases to +2 at 11th level and +3 at 21st level.
You can also draw or stow a wand once per round
as a free action on your turn, and you can load a
crossbow as a free action.[/sblock]
Speaking of which, all of your implement attacks should gain +2 attack bonus from your free Versatile Expertise (or the above option). Sadly, I don't know of any way to make this work properly on the old CB (or the new one, for that matter, until they update VE to match the errata).
You might as well use Drowmesh over plain Leather for the free +1 Reflex.
You should add in your free Improved Defenses. I have your defenses at 27 AC, 23 Fort, 27 Reflex, 27 Will.
What energy type do you want your Armor of Resistance to apply to?
Last, I came out with 2pp left over after buying your eq, while your character sheet lists 10pp. Did I miss an ability or do something wrong when purchasing?
t~