I think I found some mistakes (sorry really didn't want to, maybe it is just me...)
p2:"We will beat back the forces of General Fjoder Fortunatov and remove his rogue government from exile." (flavour text) Maybe it's just my shaby english (and the fact that i didn't sleep since 36h), but the "remove from exile" sounds just wrong.
p4: the flavour text on the units, from level Coy up you always refer to the 2IC as the NCO, but isn't that the 2nd commander? (don't know the US terms) With us the Coy will have a captain, lt and NCO as command cell, but the lt is 2IC.
Maybe just my interpretation, but I find it hard to believe that a Brigade has a CSM as 2IC (i mean absolutly no offence to all the NCOs out here)
p5: in tabel 1-1, on first level the assaulter would get voice of command, but the text gives as first class feature "tough as nails", what sounds more logical to me.
Oops just found out that the whole table is the leadership table, copy-paste error i guess.
That was it for now, maybe i'm just nitpicking. But i'm to tired to sleep and have to do something...
I was told by friends who've already got their copies that they like it alot, i will also like it, but now i'm just finishing the book (on my tempo)
btw: thx vig for the great work done and still doing