Should be in bed but character checking is so much fun...
Quentin:
Spell Failure is really n/a until you gain an arcane spell casting class.
Earth Breaker(melee): +5 = +1 (BAB) + 4 (STR)/ DMG = 2d6+6(B), CRIT 20x3
and plz add
Earth Breaker(melee/pa): +4 = +1 (BAB) + 4 (STR) - 1 (feat)/ DMG = 2d6+7(B), CRIT 20x3
Dagger(ranged): +2 = +1 (BAB) + 1 (DEX)/ DMG = 1d4+4(P), CRIT 19-20x2, Range: 10 ft.
copy paste them if you wish
Two traits needed you can find a larger list than the APG
here
Skills and equipment left to do but still need money, I'm working on that next.
Dorain:
You have Hero Points one and if everyone wants to we will use them for this. So keep that there for now.
Might need to change your deity to Gozreh - just using the PF deities to make it easy. That reminds me where is that post with the Greyhawk deities changed over to PF (could be handy).
Armor bonus for scalemail is +5
Acrobatics should be -3
Fly should be -3
What animal companion are you looking to get at LvL 4 - I would like to RP it if possible.
Starsplicer:
Wisdom modifier should be +0
Fort save should be +5 (con is +2)
You have a +1 racial bonus added to all your range weapons?? Do you mean your size bonus for being small? That is also added to your melee attacks
daggers dmg type is p when thrown
Fly should be +2
Perception should be +0
Carry capacities are off...
Code:
Lgt Med Hvy Lift Push
Max Weight: 19.5 39.75 60 60/120 600
Great background... I might just have to add somethings to the game that may relate to Kara's strange origin.
Cididien:
A Greyhawk god as well. You might want to look into
Cayden Cailean as a deity to thank when things go your characters way.
Spell Failure is really n/a until you gain an arcane spell casting class.
Threatening Defender is a fan created trait and I think it needs an extra line. Please add to it; minimum of -1 to your melee attack roll, as I don't like how it doesn't give the character a penalty at all until they reaches BAB +4.
Disguise should be +2
Intimidate should be +2
Profession gambler has no ranks and should be na (although says you are a gambler in background)
Backpack should weigh 2 lbs
Waterskins cost 1 gp
Outfit you are wearing doesn't count towards your total weight
Have money spent at 111.11 (odd
)
Have total weight at 41 lbs.
Another good background (I like I can make up a one handed very angry NPC for later - Thanks)
HM