UPDATE!
Hey dudes, sorry for being late on the update. We ended up leaving a day late due to traffic at the border, blah blah blah...
Anyway, a few comments on the characters:
KEYS
1. Reflex and Will saves should be +8 and +1 respectively, due to the Halfling racial bonus (+1 on all saving throws). You've added the Fortitude save correctly, though (+2).
2. Hide should be +13, not +12 (4 ranks + 5 DEX bonus + 4 for small-sized creature).
3. Balance, Escape Artist, Pick Pocket, and Tumble should all be +9, not +8 (4 ranks + 5 DEX bonus for each).
Everything else on Keys looks great. It's cool to have a disfigured halfling women with severe pathos in the party. And I'm serious, not being funny.
ROTH NOSEBREAKER
1. You've listed his height as 6'4" and his weight as only 174 lbs., which would actually make him very skinny. Yet he's described as "covered with bulging muscles" and his STR is 18. So probably his weight should be closer to 215-225 lbs.
2. Craft (Blacksmithing) should be +6 (4 ranks + INT bonus 2), not +7.
3. Just a question: are you *sure* you want Roth's Wisdom to be *3*? Keep in mind that Wisdom is not just how "wise" a character is, it is also "perception . . . being in tune with one's surroundings" (PHB p.9). A character with a Wisdom of only 3 would be nearly autistic...
Don't get me wrong, I'll allow the Wisdom score, but I want to make sure you're going in with your eyes open, since Roth's won't be.
PRYAS FARBOULDER
Everything looks great on Pryas.
Overall, I'm really happy with the party. A very intriguing trio, with lots of role-playing potential. Sweet! Just make sure Roth is pointed in the right direction at all times...and maybe watch RAIN MAN for inspiration.
I'll see you boys over at PLAYING THE GAME. It's Monday night as I type this, and I'll have the first game posting up tomorrow a.m. (maybe later tonight, if all goes well). See you there!
Dr. Screampunk