Ashy
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Very nicely done - this gripped me like nothing has in a LONG time.... It is almost as good as the "Black Eyed Children" and the "Door Thumper" from another thread in the EN World recent past...
The ending was a bit forced and predictable, but the elements of realism inserted throughout the piece were perfect. As a caver myself, I got chills many times reading this - you DO hear things like this and you DO think these things when you are in the deep places of the earth...
Very nice indeed - thanks for the link!
I need to do some research on the Hodag....
Edit: the Hodag is "real" at least...but it is not a cave monster.
http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8&q="Hodag"
http://www.wildwisconsin.com/hodag.html
The ending was a bit forced and predictable, but the elements of realism inserted throughout the piece were perfect. As a caver myself, I got chills many times reading this - you DO hear things like this and you DO think these things when you are in the deep places of the earth...
Very nice indeed - thanks for the link!
I need to do some research on the Hodag....
Edit: the Hodag is "real" at least...but it is not a cave monster.
http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8&q="Hodag"
http://www.wildwisconsin.com/hodag.html
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