kingpin000
Explorer
Hi there,
i am working on my own WOIN adaption of the Mass Effect setting. Finally I finished my first draft of the player races, but I need some unbiased eyes for proofreading. As creation tool, I used the WOIN Racebuilding Engine PDF and tried to keep the building points around 20.
You can tell me everything you find, the good, the bad and the ugly. This can be spelling/grammer errors, unclear/bad rulings, things I should add/drop and so on. Especially my own created exploits need some approval from the experts.
The draft can be found here!
Thanks in advance
PS: When I finished an another part I will open a new thread!
i am working on my own WOIN adaption of the Mass Effect setting. Finally I finished my first draft of the player races, but I need some unbiased eyes for proofreading. As creation tool, I used the WOIN Racebuilding Engine PDF and tried to keep the building points around 20.
You can tell me everything you find, the good, the bad and the ugly. This can be spelling/grammer errors, unclear/bad rulings, things I should add/drop and so on. Especially my own created exploits need some approval from the experts.
The draft can be found here!
Thanks in advance
PS: When I finished an another part I will open a new thread!