Hussar
Legend
I'm a big fan of Beneath Ceaseless Skies - a fantasy and SF fanzine (possibly a semi-prozine, I'm not sure) and I just finished a story that really ties into this topic. In the story - My Father's Wounds there is an order of "clerics" with magical healing abilities. They are ordered to a battlefield in order to provide aid to the soldiers. The order is neutral, so they heal both sides equally.
An interesting passage from the story:
Earlier someone asked me what the tipping point was. This is a good example of where I would draw the line between plot element and setting element. The healing that is provided, the fantasy element in the story, actually changes how the soldiers behave. Instead of simply trying to put an opponent out of the fight, they actively search to kill opponents in order to prevent the clerics from bringing them back.
The fantastic element has a real, direct impact on how people act in the story.
To me, that's great.
An interesting passage from the story:
My Father's Wounds said:The seventeen real Blacksmiths move quickly among the wounded. The survivors are bloody tatters. Both sides have learned if they don’t kill their opponent outright, the Blacksmiths will return them, refreshed, to the battlefield the next morning—so instead of running someone through and moving on, they have twisted the blade, cleaved their enemy open to the spine, gouged out their heart.
For a Blacksmith to heal even one man requires great strength. Though with faith, all things may be remade, reforging dead landscape into breathing tissue is still an exertion. The priests breathe life into a pile of dry rocks, mold the newly animated rock-flesh into a pink, quivering mass, wrench the bones of the ribcage open and squeeze the new lung until it pumps on its own. Even Father looks exhausted.
Earlier someone asked me what the tipping point was. This is a good example of where I would draw the line between plot element and setting element. The healing that is provided, the fantasy element in the story, actually changes how the soldiers behave. Instead of simply trying to put an opponent out of the fight, they actively search to kill opponents in order to prevent the clerics from bringing them back.
The fantastic element has a real, direct impact on how people act in the story.
To me, that's great.