Converting Monsters from Polyhedron Magazine

[Shade]

Looks good! Updated.

Normal doppelgangers don't list their languages in the flavor text, although it is clear from the "As Characters" section that they all speak Common.

Shall we borrow another automatic language from the list for the uran?

Automatic Languages: Common. Bonus Languages: Auran, Dwarven, Elven, Gnome, Halfling, Giant, Terran.

Do we need an "As Characters" section for the urans?

 

[Cleon]

Looks good! Updated.

Normal doppelgangers don't list their languages in the flavor text, although it is clear from the "As Characters" section that they all speak Common.

Shall we borrow another automatic language from the list for the uran?

Do we need an "As Characters" section for the urans?

Yes, I was wondering about the language bit. Copying the SRD Doppelganger's is fine.

Since we've given them a Level Adjustment I suppose they'd better have Urans As Characters.

 

[Shade]

How about this?

Uran doppelgangers speak Common. Most also speak an additional humanoid language or two (see bonus languages in Urans as Characters, below).

 

[Cleon]

How about this?

Uran doppelgangers speak Common. Most also speak an additional humanoid language or two (see bonus languages in Urans as Characters, below).

The bit in brackets seems over-wordy. How about.

Uran doppelgangers speak Common. Most speak several humanoid languages as bonus languages (see Urans as Characters, below).

 

[Shade]

Updated.

Anything left?

 

[Cleon]

Updated.

Anything left?

It looks good.

The only suggesting I could come up with is introducing hyphens or brackets into the last line of the tactics to make it read easier, e.g. "If the uran has survived an encounter with a powerful monster (such as an ogre, annis hag or gargoyle), it is likely to have learned that monster's form to use in combat."

 

[freyar]

Looks good as is or with additional parentheses, as far as I am concerned.

 

[Cleon]

Looks good as is or with additional parentheses, as far as I am concerned.

Might as well humo(u)r me with parenthesis, then.

 

[Shade]

Updated to be more parethentically pleasing.

 

[Cleon]

Updated to be more parethentically pleasing.

After those pleasing parentheses I propose this project has been perfected.