You read Tolkien because you enjoy a good slow read and the poetry of the English language.
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That's why I don't accept the idea that "Tolkien needed a tougher editor" or "Tolkien is long-winded".
I enjoy Tolkien a lot, but I don't think an editor would have done any harm - even if it would have made the books different from the ones I enjoy.
People that suggest Tolkien wrote like this are either completely unfamiliar with his work or are misrepresenting it on purpose. I think it is most likely that most people get bored having to think there way through literature so they tend to criticise literary authors as "long winded."
I don't think that's fair. There are lengthy descriptive passage in Tolkien. Personally, I find the most boring one is the description of the Old Forest leading up to the struggle with Old Man Willow. I'm pretty sure I've fallen asleep more than once reading that passage, and while you may suggest that's just verisimilitude on the part of the writer, I'm not sure I agree!
As to literature being "long winded" - I don't read much fiction, but most of what I do read I think would be classified as "literary" fiction - it appears on those shelves in the bookshops, at least - and a lot of it is not long winded. For whatever reason, my favourite author is Graham Greene (a very different sort of Catholicism from Tolkien's!) and he is not long winded.
part of the reason I'm reading REH and Leiber is because I'm writing a novel with strong S&S elements, so I want to go to the source to get a feel for the genre.
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Hemmingway is literature and he was concise.
Hesitant as I am to compare REH to Hemingway, REH is generally pithy, if often a bit overblown. Very modernist in tone (despite the trappings), especially when compared to Tolkien.
I think perhaps if the author spends a lot of time on something, especially it is at the beginning of the work, one might want to consider the likelihood that whatever the author is being "long winded" about is actually probably something important, and may in fact be among the most important things in the books.
Perhaps. But it is equally legitimate to think that the author is making an error of conflating length with emphasis. It is possible to make something the centre of a work without needlessly (and longwindedly) dwelling on it.
It's okay to not like Tolkien or to not be particularly inspired by his work, but when people make such demonstrably wrong claims about his literary skill, what they do is expose their lack of knowledge and understanding of literature. It's like saying Crime and Punishment is "too long": it is a perfectly valid opinion, but also an ignorant and insipid one.
But I could equally say that comparing Tolkien to Dostoyevsky shows an ignorance of literature. I mean, I don't want to be too judgemental, but the latter is practically the founder of one of the most important post-enlightenment ways of thinking about humanity. Huge chunks of contemporary culture - and all sorts of deep features of our culture - can arguably be attributed to that school. I'm not sure that the same is true of Tolkien. His influence in this respect seems to me to have been minimal, and the ideals he favoured are more-or-less dead in the practical world.
the older I get and the more I think about history and politics and the way the voice of privilege drowns out other points of view, the more Tolkien's romanticizing of medieval life in general and monarchy in particular grates on me.
I know what you're getting at, but I tend to have a different reaction - it drives home for me the independence of aesthetics from morality and politics (which maybe is a version of art for art's sake!).
I had the same thought the other evening after seeing Hero (the Jet Li/Maggie Cheung/Tony Leung movie) again. For me, at least, visually amazing and incredibly moving - especially the death of the Maggie Cheung character, which the wikipedia entry (which I just looked up to check my spellings!) misdescribes (in my view) as being prompted by guilt.
Yet the values that are exemplified here - a certain sort of romantic conception of loyalty and honour, in particular - don't really speak to me as
political values at all. Another instance of the gap between morals and aesthetics. (In my view - which I realise not everyone shares.)
But Sam's the hero!
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I found the echoes of the first world war and the triumph of the ordinary man. Sam is the officer's batman (valet) who stops him failing.
While this may be biographically accurate (I don't know much about Tolkien's war experience), for me it would tend to confirm Dausuul's criticism. I find that view of the "ordinary man" - the batman - a very condescending one (although not confiend to Tolkien). One of the best treatments of this particular motif, in my view (and also in my view a very good absurdist treatment of the war overall) is Blackadder Goes Forth (with Baldric as the batman).