Jemal
Adventurer
Shay: That's fine.
VR: Mostly fine, two things:
First, Shouldn't Enoch be PL 10 now? You still have him listed as 9.
Second, I'm thinking Concealment probably shouldn't benefit from your '+2 PL for offense' trait, leaving the cap at 10. It isn't an offensive, resisted effect normally - you added the resistible as a FLAW.
VR: Mostly fine, two things:
First, Shouldn't Enoch be PL 10 now? You still have him listed as 9.

Second, I'm thinking Concealment probably shouldn't benefit from your '+2 PL for offense' trait, leaving the cap at 10. It isn't an offensive, resisted effect normally - you added the resistible as a FLAW.